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Category: Adult

Alfresco

Alex Birch

'ALFRESCO'
by Alex Birch

Category: Adult
Words: 500

Joanne walked slowly home through the wooded park, trying to think,
wondering how to tell her husband of 12 months that the marriage just
wasn't working.   David was so kind but she was restless, the sex
functional and unsatisfying.  She'd had no previous experience, unsure
what to expect from a relationship and she was close to tears as she
realised she had no idea where their marriage was headed.

Her reverie was interrupted by a girl's squeal among the trees and,
conquering fear, Joanne moved toward the sound just in case someone
needed help.

Moving stealthily, Joanne spotted a clearing amid the trees where a
young couple were clearly arguing, the man gripping the arm of a blonde
girl of around nineteen and shouting angrily.  Joanne flattened her
body against a tree to avoid discovery and watched.

'I only met him once.' the girl whined '.don't make a meal of it!'

'I told you what would happen if you two timed me.' the man shouted
'.and now you're going to get it!'

Joanne gasped as the girl's eyes widened .

'You wouldn't dare.' she squealed '..I'll scream!'

'Scream once and we're finished!' he snapped, grabbing her arm and
hauling the girl over to a tree stump as Joanne began to tremble.

'Nooooo, Gary..' the girl whimpered as she was unceremoniously tugged
across his knee, her firm young bottom thrust up through the light
summer skirt '.Oh you mustn't ..please!!!' as her skirt was hauled
right up exposing a pair of tanned slim legs and pink panties.

The man said nothing, simply reached out to the waistband of her
panties and almost ripped them down to her knees as the girl began to
cry in shame.

Joanne stared in shock as the firm hand began to belabour the shapely
naked bottom, the spanks like crisp pistol shots through the woodland
echo as the girl whimpered quietly, occasionally crying loudly as her
bottom began to redden appreciably, her legs parting immodestly as she
reacted to the pain .

Joanne realised, as moisture soaked her panties, that unconsciously her
hand had strayed under her skirt, her fingers rubbing the swollen labia
through her underwear.  She envied the girl, wanted so much to be in
her place, feeling what she was feeling, enjoying the burning pain of a
sound spanking. Her sexual reactions shocked her for she had never been
spanked in her life but this....!!  She began to smile as the salvation
of her marriage suddenly became so clear.  David would be stunned but
she knew he would do anything for her and for their relationship, even
if he had to be coaxed.

As the spanking finished and the girl got to her feet,  the couple
embraced passionately. The man's hand gently caressed the punished
bottom as Joanne crept quietly away.  She would be talking to David
alright but suddenly the agenda had changed as the scales fell from her
eyes.  She began to hum a song as she skipped happily through the
park.and why not?   Today was a new beginning !!.

END

Trisha Allen

Great story! I really enjoyed it and have to admit I haven't seen nor thought of a story quite like that one before. When you start out, you think that Joanne is the one who is fixing to get it by her husband of one year. I amazed as the story took a smooth twist. Fate meant for Joanne to be there at that precise moment. Her answer to her mental question sure beats counseling, which rarely helps. I don't know who wrote this but it was simply amazing. Not what I expected at all. Please keep up the good work. Trisha Allen

Janet Miles

An interesting take on a spanking story, with the protagonist not being one of the participants. I like that the outcome of the discussion with David is left open, but hopeful. On the other hand, the somewhat non-consensual and cliched nature of the spanking detracted from my enjoyment of the story overall.

Sarah Nada

Alfresco, indeed. This story is very brief but fills in just enough details of its two intersecting plots to work quite nicely. I particularly liked the semi-accidental voyeurism angle. :)

Sarah