Category: Adult
Alfresco
'ALFRESCO' by Alex Birch Category: Adult Words: 500 Joanne walked slowly home through the wooded park, trying to think, wondering how to tell her husband of 12 months that the marriage just wasn't working. David was so kind but she was restless, the sex functional and unsatisfying. She'd had no previous experience, unsure what to expect from a relationship and she was close to tears as she realised she had no idea where their marriage was headed. Her reverie was interrupted by a girl's squeal among the trees and, conquering fear, Joanne moved toward the sound just in case someone needed help. Moving stealthily, Joanne spotted a clearing amid the trees where a young couple were clearly arguing, the man gripping the arm of a blonde girl of around nineteen and shouting angrily. Joanne flattened her body against a tree to avoid discovery and watched. 'I only met him once.' the girl whined '.don't make a meal of it!' 'I told you what would happen if you two timed me.' the man shouted '.and now you're going to get it!' Joanne gasped as the girl's eyes widened . 'You wouldn't dare.' she squealed '..I'll scream!' 'Scream once and we're finished!' he snapped, grabbing her arm and hauling the girl over to a tree stump as Joanne began to tremble. 'Nooooo, Gary..' the girl whimpered as she was unceremoniously tugged across his knee, her firm young bottom thrust up through the light summer skirt '.Oh you mustn't ..please!!!' as her skirt was hauled right up exposing a pair of tanned slim legs and pink panties. The man said nothing, simply reached out to the waistband of her panties and almost ripped them down to her knees as the girl began to cry in shame. Joanne stared in shock as the firm hand began to belabour the shapely naked bottom, the spanks like crisp pistol shots through the woodland echo as the girl whimpered quietly, occasionally crying loudly as her bottom began to redden appreciably, her legs parting immodestly as she reacted to the pain . Joanne realised, as moisture soaked her panties, that unconsciously her hand had strayed under her skirt, her fingers rubbing the swollen labia through her underwear. She envied the girl, wanted so much to be in her place, feeling what she was feeling, enjoying the burning pain of a sound spanking. Her sexual reactions shocked her for she had never been spanked in her life but this....!! She began to smile as the salvation of her marriage suddenly became so clear. David would be stunned but she knew he would do anything for her and for their relationship, even if he had to be coaxed. As the spanking finished and the girl got to her feet, the couple embraced passionately. The man's hand gently caressed the punished bottom as Joanne crept quietly away. She would be talking to David alright but suddenly the agenda had changed as the scales fell from her eyes. She began to hum a song as she skipped happily through the park.and why not? Today was a new beginning !!. END
Trisha Allen email
Great story! I really enjoyed it and have to admit I haven't seen nor thought of a story quite like that one before. When you start out, you think that Joanne is the one who is fixing to get it by her husband of one year. I amazed as the story took a smooth twist. Fate meant for Joanne to be there at that precise moment. Her answer to her mental question sure beats counseling, which rarely helps. I don't know who wrote this but it was simply amazing. Not what I expected at all. Please keep up the good work. Trisha Allen
Janet Miles email
An interesting take on a spanking story, with the protagonist not being one of the participants. I like that the outcome of the discussion with David is left open, but hopeful. On the other hand, the somewhat non-consensual and cliched nature of the spanking detracted from my enjoyment of the story overall.
Sarah Nada email
Alfresco, indeed. This story is very brief but fills in just enough details of its two intersecting plots to work quite nicely. I particularly liked the semi-accidental voyeurism angle. :)
Sarah