Category: Adult
The Demonstration
THE DEMONSTRATION (ADULT) (M/F) "I'm sorry I'm late, Tom", Debbie said. "I drove way out to that new Mall near the state line." "One of the stores was selling a spanking machine!" "A spanking machine?" Tom said. "Do tell!" "I will if you sit at the table like a good hubby while I get changed" Debbie said, her voice rising as she walked into the bedroom. "When I got there a really smarmy appliance salesman was showing the machine to this middle aged guy" Debbie shouted from the next room. "He was ranting about how perfect it was for disciplining teenagers." "While they're talking the guy's daughter shows up". "She's a really pretty 19 year old college student." "Well, she thinks the machine is the biggest joke in the world". "When the salesman suggested that she "try it on for size" she climbs right on!" "It only took the salesman a couple of seconds to strap her in, and once he does he starts goading the father, asking him about her "behavior problems". "The Dad doesn't say much but he finally admits he doesn't like her "skimpy" clothes or her boyfriends". "Well, I have the perfect cure", the salesman said. "He presses the START button, and the paddles on the machine start whapping her fanny!" "Well, she's struggling against the restraints pretty hard now, but they're not budging". "And the crowd is getting bigger". "Naturally she starts to curse a blue streak at her father". "And so the salesman demonstrates the "silencer" feature and slips this little gag between her teeth". "The father and the salesman start haggling over the price, all the while oblivious to the girl, who is really struggling as the machine continues to spank her!" "The salesman agrees to sell it for 50% off - "provided that you let me demonstrate to the crowd how much more effective this machine is on bare skin". "Hear that, pumpkin?" the father teases. "Maybe next time you'll think twice before cursing Daddy". "Her father nods". "Naturally the crowd goes nuts when the salesman skins her jeans and panties down to her knees!" "Anyway, we got to back there and see it right now, Tom" Debbie said. "I want a full demonstration!" "Sounds like fun. "But what makes you think they're be another father and daughter at the Mall when we get there?" Tom gasped as his 24 year old wife Debbie re-entered the room. Her business suit was gone. Her hair was in pigtails, and she was wearing a low rise jeans and a "Dawson's Creek" T-shirt! "I'm sorry I was late Uncle Tom", Debbie whispered at her shoes. "I know I should have called". Tom tried to suppress his smile as he pushed his wife chin up so he could look into her eyes. "We'll discuss your behavior at the Mall, young lady" he said sternly.
John Benson email
What a fun idea. Everybody seems to write a spanking machine story sooner or later. And I hadn't twigged the wife as the bottom until the very end. Nice little surprise. I wish I could have been there.
--johnb
Hal email
I really enjoyed the pictures that this writer so vividly painted for us to enjoy in this story. I enjoyed the description of the salesman. It so fitted into this story. It did make me wonder if this might be used on wives in addition to teenage daughters. How many adjustments are there? I think this has been a theme of a lot of stories but I enjoyed this one, because of the twist at the end. It was not just another spanking machine story. The story was well constructed. I look forward to reading additional stories by this writer.
SirHal
Tami email
Talk about "hands on demonstration". Very unique concept, loved the ending. Funny but almost believable in the future. Great Story.
Tami