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Category: Adult

The Demonstration

Joe Whatever

THE DEMONSTRATION (ADULT) (M/F)

"I'm sorry I'm late, Tom", Debbie said.  "I drove way out to that new
Mall near the state line."  "One of the stores was selling a spanking
machine!"

"A spanking machine?" Tom said.  "Do tell!"

"I will if you sit at the table like a good hubby while I get changed"
Debbie said, her voice rising as she walked into the bedroom.

"When I got there a really smarmy appliance salesman was showing the
machine to this middle aged guy" Debbie shouted from the next room.  "He
was ranting about how perfect it was for disciplining teenagers." 
"While they're talking the guy's daughter shows up".  "She's a really
pretty 19 year old college student."  "Well, she thinks the machine is
the biggest joke in the world".  "When the salesman suggested that she
"try it on for size" she climbs right on!"

"It only took the salesman a couple of seconds to strap her in, and once
he does he starts goading the father, asking him about her "behavior
problems".  "The Dad doesn't say much but he finally admits he doesn't
like her "skimpy" clothes or her boyfriends".

"Well, I have the perfect cure", the salesman said.  "He presses the
START button, and the paddles on the machine start whapping her fanny!"

"Well, she's struggling against the restraints pretty hard now, but
they're not budging".  "And the crowd is getting bigger".

"Naturally she starts to curse a blue streak at her father".  "And so
the salesman demonstrates the "silencer" feature and slips this little
gag between her teeth".

"The father and the salesman start haggling over the price, all the
while oblivious to the girl, who is really struggling as the machine
continues to spank her!"

"The salesman agrees to sell it for 50% off - "provided that you let me
demonstrate to the crowd how much more effective this machine is on bare
skin".

"Hear that, pumpkin?" the father teases.  "Maybe next time you'll think
twice before cursing Daddy".

"Her father nods".  "Naturally the crowd goes nuts when the salesman
skins her jeans and panties down to her knees!"

"Anyway, we got to back there and see it right now, Tom" Debbie said. 
"I want a full demonstration!"

"Sounds like fun.  "But what makes you think they're be another father
and daughter at the Mall when we get there?"

Tom gasped as his 24 year old wife Debbie re-entered the room.   Her
business suit was gone.  Her hair was in pigtails, and she was wearing a
low rise jeans and a "Dawson's Creek" T-shirt!

"I'm sorry I was late Uncle Tom", Debbie whispered at her shoes.  "I
know I should have called".

Tom tried to suppress his smile as he pushed his wife chin up so he
could look into her eyes.  "We'll discuss your behavior at the Mall,
young lady" he said sternly.

John Benson

What a fun idea. Everybody seems to write a spanking machine story sooner or later. And I hadn't twigged the wife as the bottom until the very end. Nice little surprise. I wish I could have been there.

--johnb

Hal

I really enjoyed the pictures that this writer so vividly painted for us to enjoy in this story. I enjoyed the description of the salesman. It so fitted into this story. It did make me wonder if this might be used on wives in addition to teenage daughters. How many adjustments are there? I think this has been a theme of a lot of stories but I enjoyed this one, because of the twist at the end. It was not just another spanking machine story. The story was well constructed. I look forward to reading additional stories by this writer.

SirHal

Tami

Talk about "hands on demonstration". Very unique concept, loved the ending. Funny but almost believable in the future. Great Story.

Tami