Category: Adult
A Very Long Interview
A VERY LONG INTERVIEW (M/F) (ADULT) Business was booming at the Mall. The community's moral outrage over the "scandalous" dress of young women had led to the passage of the so-called "Brittany Laws" - a set of rules that empowered local police and security guards to publicly paddle the bare backsides of "indecently" clad women. Cynthia watched as Principal Patters warmed to his new summer job - using his wooden hairbrush to tan the shapely bare fanny of yet another shapely 19 year old girl. Cynthia's scorching TV interview with Patter's had defeated his evil scheme to bring back school paddling. But Principal Patters had found a new outlet for his favorite pastime. Patter's had refused Cynthia's requests for an interview. Cynthia knew that if she could get a long enough interview with him she could break him. Cynthia nervously examined the clothes in her shopping bag. Cynthia was confident the clothes in her shopping bag would get her close enough to nail him. It wasn't REALLY dangerous. Mr. Patters would DARE spank HER! Cynthia was a celebrity! A respected journalist! A Pulitzer Prize winner! Cynthia swallowed as she headed to the bathroom to change. A confident and crisply dressed professional woman in a natty pinstripe suit strode into the restroom. An anxious and frightened bimbo in a half T-shirt and denim shorts nervously tiptoed out. The pimply faced 19 year old security guard lit up like a Christmas tree when he saw Cynthia tentatively emerge from the restroom in her skimpy outfit. Cynthia recognized the guard from her blistering expose on Mall security. And it was obvious from the smile on his face that the guard recognized her. Cynthia gasped as the guard ratchet the cuffs shut tightly behind her back and pushed her to the front of the line. Principal Patters could barely contain his glee as he unzipped Cynthia's shorts and quickly skinned them down to her knees. Cynthia held her breath. She knew the next step was up to Mr. Patter's discretion. Cynthia's tiny blue panties were skimpy, and offered precious little protection. Mr. Patters smile answered all questions. Cynthia's baby blue panties were coming DOWN! Cynthia gasped as the beaming Mr. Patters teasingly hooked his fingers into the waistband of her underpants. "Please!" she gasped. "Not on the bare!" "Not in front of everyone!" The crowd was a sea of snickers, laughter, and flashbulbs as Mr. Patters effortlessly skinned her underpants down to her knees. Cynthia resolved to regain control as Mr. Patters flipped her over her knee like a doll. The tips of her sneakers and the tip of her nose were both inches from the floor. Her bottom was perfectly positioned. "I wanted to ask you why pretty girls are always spanked bare despite the fact..." WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! "Please!" "I'll be good!" WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! "I'm sorry I dressed like this!" WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! "I'll be a good girl, Sir!" WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! WHAP! Cynthia realized that this would be the longest interview of her life.
Sarah Nada email
"A Very Long Interview" has an interesting premise, in that the heroine sets herself up for a spanking. Her ulterior motive revolves around an expose, but in the meantime her posterior is exposed... While I think this story lacks polish, it is entertaining and shows real potential.
Sarah
Chantymer email
This story is very good. It lets the reader feel the satisfaction of the young security guard at finding the snooty reporter dressed inappropriately and the obvious glee of Mr. Patters at finding his antagonist in a very compromising situation (with her shorts and undies lowered below her knees and laying across his lap). The reporter seemed to think that they would not spank her since she was a celebrity. Sometimes assumptions are sooooo wrong!
Eric
"A Very Long Interview" reminded this reviewer of the outline a writer for the screen might make during a long plane journey; an idea that came to them on boarding and must be recorded before it fades. "A Very Long Interview" is a 'very public' story. Using lots of visible action to build on the theme of public humiliation it would translate into an exciting movie.