Category: Adultspecial
The Brave Girl
The Brave Girl [M/F] (Adult, 205 words) "I don't want to write! I just...I just don't!" She sat with her arms folded. Her voice part grunt, part whine melting into a pout. "Right." He got up and walked into the kitchen. Came back with a wooden spoon. "Trousers and knickers off, please." She scowled. And obeyed. "Over my lap on your back." "Noooo," she whined. Whimpered. Obeyed. He pulled her legs up and saturated her thighs with blows. She whimpered and squirmed and pursed her lips together tightly. He stopped. Brushed one hand along her leg, the other through her hair. "I know it's hard. It's painful and feels like you can't hardly bear it. But just as you've been strong and brave through this spanking, I know you are strong and brave enough to get through these next few chapters." He kissed her forehead. Returned to spanking her. Spanked her thighs with firm, rapid strokes. Spanked until well after she started crying. Covering her eyes with her arm. Writhing as he held her legs tight. He stopped. Pulled her up to himself. "Alright, big cuddle." He stroked her hair as she cried into his shoulder. "Now, my brave girl, you're going to write." She nodded. And started writing the next chapter.
Polara email
An excellent demonstration that you don't need to push the 500 word limit to tell a story with a beginning, a middle and an end! And now, a show of hands please: How many would-be writers, like me, wouldn't mind having an implacable, affectionate personal muse like the one depicted here?
Pablo email
Even though this is way short of 500 words, it feels complete. Nevertheless, I want more! The affection and connection and love leaps off the page. The hint of real-life grounds this powerfully, but it also feels like a universal sort of piece. I just want more of it. (Pablo)
Chantymer email
This is a good story, although shorter than most. The message that he is very irritated with her for pouting & refusing to continue with her writing was quite evident.