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The Mugger, the Witch and the Frog
SSC2004-12[Adult]: The Mugger, the Witch and the Frog (F/t, spank) Yep, another fairy tail this time with a villain, a witch and a frog. It contains a scene of a spanking. If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com The Mugger, the Witch and the Frog By Y. Lee Coyote Once upon a time there was a very naughty youth. He did not work like he should now that he was expelled from school but was a crook for even the army had rejected him. He was not even nice crook for he robbed weak and helpless little old ladies of their meager funds. Well, this time he picked the wrong little old lady. Melvin watched the ATM from across the street. It was late and he had just about despaired of getting a 'client' this night when he saw the old crone (surely cashing a dividend check) stuffing a wad of bills into her purse as she left and crossed the street to the park entrance. Five minutes later he grabbed her purse but he could not run off with it as he had many times before. Worse, he was being held in a painful hammerlock as if he was just a little boy and the crone was a big burly cop. The witch laughed. "Things are not always what they seem to be, young man. Not all witches fit your limited image of ugly, old crones." Melvin struggled and cursed. The witch laughed more as she dragged him to the nearby bench. She sat, undid his pants and yanked them down before flipping him over her lap. Extracting a large hairbrush from her handbag she patted his butt with it. "Naughty boys like you get spanked -- long and hard." And then is exactly what she proceeded to do causing him to howl and cry like little boys do when they are spanked long and hard. She took great pleasure in this spanking. Melvin was a very naughty boy and had long escaped his just deserts even though he was eighteen already. When he had stopped crying, she told him that she was taking him home so that she could keep an eye on him and her little Princess could play with him. "That's kidnaping, you old witch." he cried Again she laughed. "Even your parents won't know you boy." she said and then began chanting. Melvin felt strange; very strange. It was when the witch held him about his torso in her hand that he understood that she had turned him into a small frog. "I think that you will find my garden and it's pond very nice. My Princess does a very good job of keeping the mice and rats away. And don't think she'll kiss you and turn you back into a boy for my spells are not broken that easily." As she dropped him into her bag and continued on her way home, she added: "Oh, Princess is my pussy cat." The End © Copyright A.I.L. July 23, 2004 Y. Valid return address is YLeeCoyote at mail dot com (Posting address is for the spammers) See my stories at http://www.asstr.org/~YLeeCoyote/ See Goldilocks stories at http://www.geocities.com/goldilocks1938/
Alex Birch email
I found the story to be a little disjointed in construction and I wish the author had paid a little more attention to proof reading this entry before submission. There are some clumsy sentences like 'He did not work like he should now that he was expelled from school but was a crook for even the army had rejected him.' and missing prepositions which tend to make one stop and re read the sense of it. The concept was amusing and I liked the ending.
Eric
'The Mugger, the Witch and the Frog' is a wonderful example of story-telling. We think we know where the garden path is leading us, but the surprise awaiting us around the final corner is a pleasant release from tension.
Polara email
An original treatment within the fairy tale genre; definitely a candidate for inclusion in "Bedtime Stories For Spankos." I liked the way you parodied fairy-tale phrasing in "Persistent Enchantment" - a little of that would have worked well here, too.