Category: Adult
Partners in Crime
A short story for the competition: Margaret was sitting on her chair, with me standing in front of her, whilst she was continuing her explanation. "I was kept awake all night by a silent caller. Every 30 minutes. I would just get to sleep, and then the phone would ring again. All I got was silence at the other end. David was out most of the night, and when he did get back he was drunk. He kept giggling and talking, and it only dawned on me after about an hour that he knew what had happened. I have just given him the most severe thrashing and sent him to bed." "He told me you spank him quite a lot" I said. "Yes I do, whenever he deserves it. He might be my husband, and he is 24, but he can be a real child sometimes, and so I discipline him like one." "I see. Do you think he likes to be spanked?" I asked. "I really don't know. Would you?" She looked hard at me. I looked at the floor. She continued. "I asked him, why keep me awake all night, what's the fun in that. He said it was funny at the time. By now he was across my knee and I was spanking him as hard as I could. I asked him whether he thought it was as funny now. He giggled, can you imagine that. So I picked up the hairbrush and started smacking him with that. He started to sob then." She was getting herself worked up again. "And then he said "we". Not "I" any more. I asked him who else was involved. He said no one. So do you know what I did?" "What?" I asked "I told him to bend over the stool. I gave him 6 strokes of the cane, then another 6, and told him I will continue all day until he tells me. After 24 strokes he blurted out your name. That's why you are now here." "Right." "What do you have to say then?" Another hard look. "We had been drinking, and egged each other on." I trailed off. "Really? Tell me, as his partner in crime what about sharing his punishment then?" "Well, I don't really know..." Margaret was now fully wound up, no nights sleep probably helping. "Well I do know. I have seen you both together. You've got really close. Well, I will punish you now. Then you can decide about your behaviour in future." Margaret told me to lower my trousers and pants and bend across her knee. She thrashed me. It hurt, a lot, but it was my first ever spanking, and with the pain was a feeling of great excitement. Margaret said in my ear "So Dad, you did want me to thrash you. Well, it won't be the last time, I can tell you." "Yes please Dear, every time you say I have earned it" I said, through the lovely pain, as she continued to thrash me.
Alex Birch email
Well this was an F/M story with a difference. Without giving anything away it was a very interesting concept with an unexpected turn of events. Margaret was VERY dominant ...so that' s what happens these days when you have a 'boys night out'!! An interesting idea.
Hal email
For the first couple of paragraphs, I was a little lost as to who was who. Maybe it was just me, but the characters in this story were not clear. It took a while and that did not allow me to sit back and just enjoy the story. Maybe that was by design. Maybe the writer wanted to keep you alert. In this story, I think that the writer forgot to close the opening quotation marks at times. But with that said, the word pictures created by the writer were interesting. I look forward to reading my stories by this writer.
SirHal
Ivy Tran email
Well this was a very interesting story; I liked that little twist in the end, it was kind of funny. A little drama and a little alcohol and a little spanking, make a great story. Well done!