Category: Adult
Shopping Trip
** Note: Allusions are made both to spanking and to enemas. I had no idea where to put this one, so I decided on the generic Adult category. It's not that edgy, in my opinion, and it's pretty much my kink <blush>. Oh, and I posted this before, but not as a story, exactly, and not for an SSC. So, I thought, what the hell. ** I have a fantasy about going to the store with my "Daddy." He'll tell me to get in the car because we need to buy the tools we'll need for that night.He'll drive me to a drug store where they are sure to have what he requires. Daddy will take his time looking at various hair brushes, tapping them against his palm, while I look around trying not to think about what he has in mind, hoping no one else can guess. He'll give up on the hairbrushes when he sees a rack holding bath brushes -- thicker, and more thuddy than their hair-grooming cousins. He'll say, too loudly in my opinion, "Yes, Angela. I think this will do quite nicely." Then, I'll beg him, quietly, not to go to the Other Aisle. But, it will be no use. Daddy will take me by the hand, after handing me the bath brush and telling me he wants me to hold it for a while and feel how heavy it is, and he'll lead me to the Other Aisle. The one with Fleets items and "combo packs." Daddy will pick up each item, read the side of the box, make a big show of finding "exactly what we need." He'll make me look at the boxes, too, and if I resist he'll tell me to read the side of the Fleet Prep Kit out loud. When he's picked exactly what he wants, we'll take all the items to the counter. Daddy will stand there holding my hand while the guy rings up each item. He'll keep giving me "that look" while I blush furiously and beg him with my eyes not to say anything. Then, when change has been handed back Daddy will look at me and say, "Well, Angela, let's head home. We have a long night ahead of us, don't we Sweetheart?" As we turn away he'll pat my bottom possessively before taking my hand again. And we'll go home to put it all to use...
Joni email
ooooh "Squirm!!!" I think your Daddy is a big meanie, and I think you like it! That's very naughty, you know! This is good writing, and conveys the sense of anticipation quite nicely. Thank you for sharing this!
J*ni
Haley Brimley email
Argghh! Teasing. In a great way. Shows exactly that you don't need spanking action in order to write a good spanking story (duh). Instead, the choice to focus exclusively on the choice of "tools" turns out to be a major winner. It builds the anticipation nicely, in a tummy-twisting way. To be honest, I quite forgot that it is supposed to be an ageplay story after all. The second time around, the first line "I have a fantasy about going to the store with my "Daddy."" caught me by surprise, and this is points scored by the author. Very well done, indeed.
Ivy Tran email
It was very, very funny and I thought the embarrassment might be something someone would might-be forced to do. I hope only in extenuating circumstances. The author was great with the details, as if you could actually see yourself in the same situation, at least the females, having to do the same things and still act nonchalant about the whole public ordeal.