Category: Adultshortlisted
Pervertable Playsets
Notes: Word count = 506; This was written with the help of a friend - some of you know him as davoh :). Copyright 2004 by asparkle2 at yahoo dot com and davo at jump dot net. All rights reserved. Pervertable Playsets =====by sparkle===== Being outside in the bright sunlight in her current attire - lack thereof - apparently wasn't enough. Beth looked up at the wooden playset frame and shuddered at the perversion. She watched him tie a rope firmly above her hips, then thread one between her legs, tucking it fussily between her labia. He tied it off securely to the waist rope above her pubis and stood back to survey her. He looked for so long Beth could feel the blush spreading down her neck. Another length of rope wound around her breasts, popping them out, just enough to remind her of their slightly swollen condition. And her nipples were encircled tightly with strings - the ends of the strings were left to dangle against her ribcage, taunting her. That was all she wore - except her ponytail. Apparently pleased, Harry grasped her nipple leading strings and tugged, urging her forward to the wooden ladder. He helped Beth to climb onto the first step and steady herself. Beth shivered, grateful when he pressed behind her, supporting her. She began to relax but then stiffened and gasped. He was tying the rope at her waist to a step - and then the nipple strings to another higher than chest level, pulling Beth's breasts through the opening between the steps. Beth couldn't help the tremor in her voice. "Wh- what?" He chuckled audaciously before stepping back. And there she was, trapped on a ladder, attached by her nipples and a rope that rubbed her clit, inner labia and anus. "Oh no." But the words rang of pleading submission, not fright. "Yes," he said, and Beth could hear the grin in his voice. The glee. The delight. "What am I going to have you do?" She shuddered. "Step down," she moaned. "Continue." The words slipped out slowly, with seconds between necessary to force out the next. "So . . . everything pulls. Tight. High. Painfully." "Excellent idea," Harry exclaimed, as though he hadn't thought of it already. And then as she was beginning to feel despair, he added devilishly, "An excellent start." "Start?" Beth squeaked. "Once you're safely on the ground, I'm going to tie your hands behind you to your waist, so you'll enjoy the struggle more. Then I'm going to walk over to that birch tree you're facing, and trim off some branches." She felt his hands in her hair, untying the ribbon. Her curls fell down around her face, draping her eyes until he softly pulled the loose locks back and tucked them behind each ear. "I'll be back - to birch that lovely backside. I can't wait to see you squirm, hear your squeals and yelps." Beth wondered how he'd react to outright shrieks. Her nipples ached. Her cunt throbbed. Her bottom was alive with expectation. "Good girl. Now step down." Beth felt the blood rush to her head as she did so - and to her nipples and pussy. She let out a dry sob and tried to stay very still. He held her, helping her, even as he chuckled.
Chantymer email
Wicked storyline. Well written, makes the reader feel as if they are there. The writer makes the reader feel her dismay as she realizes that she will have to step down, pulling her ropes and the nipple threads tighter. And then he cruelly tells her he is going to whip her backside and goes off to retrieve a switch. Would like to see more of this story.
Polara email
Extremely hot situation well described. I like the use of concrete sensory words, both in the description and the dialog. Another nice touch is where he asks her, "What am I going to have you do?" Both participants seem to be enjoying themselves immensely - as did this reader.
Pablo email
Stripped of all context - as well as clothing, it seems - there's not much of a narrative here, not much to connect us to these people. We don't know who they are, *why* they are, except to present a kinky vignette to us. So the piece rises and falls on how we connect to the kinky ideas, rather than the characters. And there's much to relish. The scene is carefully, deliberately described. The outdoor setting gives everything a brightly lit, everyday tone, which contrasts with the darker desires. It's wonderfully charged and the characters' enjoyment is vivid. I suppose I just miss a reason for the scene to exist, beyond the fact that they find it hot. (Pablo)