Category: Adult
Small Change
SSC-2004 Small Change (Adult) by Ouchigirl Every night, Catriona gets a bedtime spanking. No matter how good she is during the day, she goes to be with a sore bottom. Sometimes, Jared spanks her hard and fast before they retire, and sometimes he spanks her slowly, deliberately, whispering, "Such a naughty, naughty girl" Those are her favourite spankings. They almost always make love after one of those. Bedtime spanking has become a ritual and like all rituals, it's comfortable but predictable. Before tonight's spanking, she whines, "I'm bored; I want a different game, at least for a while". Jared agrees. What could they create to keep the mundane at bay? She is the clever one. She looks around the room and spots his coin jar. "How about this? Once a week, we count the change in the jar: pennies on Monday, nickels on Tuesday, dimes on Wednesday, quarters on Thursday what they're worth, not how many there are and that will determine how many spanks I get at bedtime." Jared smiles, then knits up a faux frown. "But that leaves the weekend. We can't have you thinking you'll get away unspanked on Friday , Saturday, and Sunday. So Friday, we'll take the silver coins and count them. One minute of the hairbrush for each coin." She pouts. It is such a pretty pout that Jared feels his heart swell. He wants to up-end her, give her a careful dusting and take her to bed, soon. "What about Saturday and Sunday?" she smirks. This time, he devises the answer. "On Saturday, you'll roll up all the coins from the jar. The value of the remaining coins will bring you a like number of cane strokes." She looks scared. She is scared. She is also very pleased, mostly because he has gotten into the spirit of the thing and obviously is enjoying it. "Sunday; is that my day of rest?" She tugs at his earlobe, gently, It tells him all he needs to know. "Sunday, I will empty my pockets and toss a coin. Heads, you get a good-girl spanking. Tails, you get a very bad girl spanking, including six of the best with the tawse." She truly, truly hates the tawse, so this coin toss is nothing to be flip about. If he takes the tawse to hand, he'll use it properly and she wwill be a very sorry girl. Jared walks across the room and sifts carefully through the jar. "It's Thursday. There are seven quarters here," he stares at her and morphes from her lover to her tormentor. "Over my knee, young lady. You're due 175 sharp smacks before bed. This time, I'll use my hand," he pauses for effect. "This time". He tans her hide soundly with those 175 smacks and she sniffs and kicks and nearly wriggles off his lap twice. "Such a naughty, naughty girl..." he whispers. Catriona jumps into bed, peeks from under the covers, and just before she kisses him, wonders what she'll find in her old piggy bank tomorrow. (500 words)
Alex Birch email
This is a well constructed story and I like the idea of the coin counting to give their spanking lives a lift. The interplay between the characters was sharp and credible which shows the writer has a good ear for dialogue and relates it well. I thought the ending was just a mite tame but that's just a perception, not really even a criticism. All in all very nice.
Trisha Allen email
Great story! Well written! The author has a great imagination and along with their expertise for the written language, wove this into quite an interesting story. Keep up the good work!
Eric
"Small Change" reminded this reviewer of standing on street corners collecting for charity. In many ways it was a game of chance, and it was always exciting to open the collection can and sort the donations into the various denominations. As far as I know, nobody was ever able to translate into spankings their efforts at collecting. Perhaps we just relied on stories like "Small Change" to link gambling with sex. This reviewer thanks the writer of "Small Change" for the opportunity to indulge in a bit of nostalgic fantasy.