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Category: Adult

Small Change

Ouchigirl

SSC-2004  Small Change (Adult) by Ouchigirl

Every night, Catriona gets a bedtime spanking.

No matter how good she is during the day, she goes to be with a sore
bottom. Sometimes, Jared spanks her hard and fast before they retire,
and sometimes he spanks her slowly, deliberately, whispering, "Such a
naughty, naughty girl"

Those are her favourite spankings. They almost always make love after
one of those.

Bedtime spanking has become a ritual and like all rituals, it's
comfortable but predictable.

Before tonight's spanking, she whines, "I'm bored; I want a different
game, at least for a while".

Jared agrees. What could they create to keep the mundane at bay?

She is the clever one. She looks around the room and spots his coin
jar.

"How about this?  Once a week, we count the change in the jar: pennies
on Monday, nickels on Tuesday, dimes on Wednesday, quarters on Thursday
 what they're worth, not how many there are  and that will determine
how many spanks I get at bedtime."

Jared smiles, then knits up a faux frown. "But that leaves the weekend.
We can't have you thinking you'll get away unspanked on Friday ,
Saturday, and Sunday. So Friday, we'll take the silver coins and count
them. One minute of the hairbrush for each coin."

She pouts. It is such a pretty pout that Jared feels his heart swell.
He wants to up-end her, give her a careful dusting and take her to bed,
soon.

"What about Saturday and Sunday?" she smirks.

This time, he devises the answer.

"On Saturday, you'll roll up all the coins from the jar. The value of
the remaining coins will bring you a like number of cane strokes."

She looks scared. She is scared. She is also very pleased, mostly
because he has gotten into the spirit of the thing and obviously is
enjoying it.

"Sunday; is that my day of rest?" She tugs at his earlobe, gently, It
tells him all he needs to know.

"Sunday, I will empty my pockets and toss a coin. Heads, you get a
good-girl spanking. Tails, you get a very bad girl spanking, including
six of the best with the tawse."

She truly, truly hates the tawse, so this coin toss is nothing to be
flip about. If he takes the tawse to hand, he'll use it properly and
she wwill be a very sorry girl.

Jared walks across the room and sifts carefully through the jar.

"It's Thursday. There are seven quarters here," he stares at her and
morphes from her lover to her tormentor. "Over my knee, young lady.
You're due 175 sharp smacks before bed. This time, I'll use my hand,"
he pauses for effect. "This time".

He tans her hide soundly with those 175 smacks and she sniffs and kicks
and nearly wriggles off his lap twice.

"Such a naughty, naughty girl..." he whispers.

Catriona jumps into bed, peeks from under the covers, and just before
she kisses him, wonders what she'll find in her old piggy bank
tomorrow.

(500 words)

Alex Birch

This is a well constructed story and I like the idea of the coin counting to give their spanking lives a lift. The interplay between the characters was sharp and credible which shows the writer has a good ear for dialogue and relates it well. I thought the ending was just a mite tame but that's just a perception, not really even a criticism. All in all very nice.

Trisha Allen

Great story! Well written! The author has a great imagination and along with their expertise for the written language, wove this into quite an interesting story. Keep up the good work!

Eric

"Small Change" reminded this reviewer of standing on street corners collecting for charity. In many ways it was a game of chance, and it was always exciting to open the collection can and sort the donations into the various denominations. As far as I know, nobody was ever able to translate into spankings their efforts at collecting. Perhaps we just relied on stories like "Small Change" to link gambling with sex. This reviewer thanks the writer of "Small Change" for the opportunity to indulge in a bit of nostalgic fantasy.