Category: Adult
For the Asking
SSC '04 [Adult] 500 words For the Asking By Rhosymedre The backyard baked and shimmered. No breeze ruffled the lap pool or played in the spreading oaks shading the protected enclosure. Emma lazed on her stomach, shielded from the grass' creepy crawlies by a plush beach towel. She grunted appreciatively at John who equally lazily sat cross-legged and massaged her with sunscreen she didn't really need. He adored a bikini-clad Emma. The skimpy periwinkle (trimmed by cream) suit beautifully accentuated his favorite part of her dorsal anatomy and he itched to drag the clingy material down. So he did. Emma shot him a knowing look, but then closed her eyes and sank happily into the tactility of his finger pads drawing patterns on her bottom. "You'll never ask for one, will you?" "For what, John?" She knew what he meant. "For the spanking you crave," he prompted. "Must I crave it for you to love me?" Emma retorted. Then she volleyed into another area of the court: "Why must I ask, for that matter?" She tossed her summer streaked hair behind her shoulder and affected an exasperated pout. John, ever the student of human nature and seldom hesitant to infiltrate the inner life of his intimates, squidged his eyes, feigning hurt. Gently cupping up from her gluteal fold, he pressed. "I want you to ask, Emma. Don't shy away. Don't be coy either. Voice your longings. Trust me to give you what you need. But *I* need you to ask me." Reaching behind her to overlap his hand now dabbling inside her natal cleft, Emma locked with his gaze again. "Johnny, you know I trust you. But I'm scared that if we start down this path, I might get too greedy and want something more extreme than a nicely blushed, smartly warm set of gluts." "Sweetie, have faith in yourself. Have confidence; your impulses are healthy." "Not aberrant? Not perved-out?" She glowered, withdrawing her hands; folding them under her head. Emma stared at the pool, her butt clenching subconsciously. "Those are labels, sweetie. Forget them! Be yourself. That's who I love." John tickled her mounds, palms molded to her cheeks, thumbs arcing like little windshield wipers. He sought to soothe. And to sway. "I know what you want from me. Say the words. Tell me to reach one arm under you -- across your abdomen -- to support. Tell me to rub your ass cheeks with the other and then slap lightly, almost still a patting. When ready, give me rein to cup my hand, snap my wrist, exercise my elbow and shoulder. Let yourself go through stages as I buff your bottom from mallow rose to lady bug red. Relax and let me roast your ass -- and mind and emotions -- consummately." He'd said all he would. "John." "Mmm." "I can't ask you." Her bikini covering her unspanked buns again, they retreated indoors, slouching dispiritedly side by side. ++++++++++++++++++++++ This morning in bed, Emma whispers in her lover's ear: "Johnny, please spank me. Exactly as you described last week."
Joni email
Rho,
Another fine story from you! Asking is so hard, and I loved that he could ask for what he needed, and then that she could as well.
J*ni
John Benson email
Very descriptive. One can taste the lazy summer afternoon, feel her comfort, discomfort, insecurity. And finally self acceptance. Very nice.
--johnb
Hal email
This was a nice story to read. It had a nice flow to it. Some nice word pictures. I just did not find this story to be that new or exciting. Nothing technically wrong with the story. It just didn't reach out and grab my attention. During the entire time that I needed to read and enjoy this story the word "dorsal" kept my mind busy. I just took the time to look up the word again. "Dorsal" to me, is the back area and not normally the area that one spanks. It is the area between the neck and the waist. Maybe I am missing something. I look forward to reading more stories by this writer.
SirHal