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Category: Adult

Money talks

Storyteller


Money talks (Adult)
by Storyteller
500 words


Money talks

"You may be my boss, Mr Henderson, but you're talking
rubbish.  Not everything has a price."
"I'm sorry Jackie, in this game money buys
everything."
Steve Henderson eyed his Marketing manger, from her
deep brunette hair, past her pouting lips.  He loved
the way her white blouse stretched taut over her firm
bosom and her skirt ended tantalisingly at mid-thigh.
"Prove it," barked Jackie.
Mr Henderson beckoned Jackie to follow him to the
sales office, a room filled with girls processing
orders.  

"Ladies can I have a moment."
One by one the girls looked up, as Jackie waited
patiently next to Steve.
"Right ladies I have an offer."
Jackie remained intrigued.
"Is any girl willing to have her bare bottom smacked
in my office for a thousand pounds in cash?"
The girls stared silently at one another.  Was he
serious?  Had they heard right?
"See," Jackie whispered.  "Money doesn't buy
everything."
"Two thousand!"
"Three thousand!"
Still no response, though a couple of girls showed
signs of temptation.
"Five thousand!"
"I'll do it!"
Jackie looked up to see Penny, a nineteen-year old
sales clerk, thrust her hand excitedly skywards.
"Excellent," beamed Mr Henderson retreating to his
office.

Penny entered the office behind Jackie, as Mr
Henderson counted out the money.
"Four-eight, four-nine, five thousand.  Penny - you
know what you have to do if you want it."
Nervously Penny raised her skirt and lowered her lacy
knickers.
"Er...where do you want me?"
"Over my knee, young lady."
Penny shuffled forward to where Mr Henderson sat
behind his desk.
"Come on girl, we haven't got all day!"
Penny found herself fully prone over his lap, palms
flat to the floor, contemplating her predicament.  Her
whole body tensed at Mr Henderson's strong hand
slapping her fleshy behind.  A wince then a squeal
slid from her mouth.  All the time he spanked
alternate cheeks, the severity of the chastisement
forcing a moan from deep within her.
"Stop complaining young lady, I am going to have five
grands-worth out of you!"
Jackie shied away; knowing it was as much for her
benefit as his.
Moments later the spanking had ended.  A sobbing Penny
lay exhausted over her master's lap, her bottom
glowing like an over-ripe peach,
"Well done, you've earned your money."
Penny rose, somewhat in disbelief at what she had
done.  She pulled her knickers up from her knees and
allowed her skirt to fall back into position.  With a
kiss on the cheek Mr Henderson handed her the money
and showed her out of the office, back to a room full
of gossiping staff.
"Come on girls, the funs over.  I don't pay you to
stand around chatting!"

Mr Henderson smugly closed his door, leaving himself
alone with Jackie.
"See Jackie, money buys everything!"
"I suppose so, though it doesn't guarantee you value
for money."
"Why do say that, Jackie?  You saw, nobody would do it
for less."
"You didn't ask everyone.  I would have done it for
three grand!"

Haron

Interesting that some people are willing to part with quite a lot of money just to prove that money can buy things.

Eric

'Money Talks' is a very good example of story-telling. The fast-paced development seduces the reader until the storyteller is ready for the surprise ending - a delicious piece of schadenfreude. Most satisfying.

Pablo

Very neatly structured. The boss is gradually puffed up like a balloon, only to be loudly punctured at the end. Not sure how much I like the moral, which is that everyone does indeed have their price, and the trick is merely to find it, but I do like that a story that apparently played with the idea of male abuse of power ended up undercutting that. I'm left wondering if he missed his chance with Jackie, or whether she'd *still* go along for the three thousand. (Pablo)