Category: Adult
Winning Him Over
WINNING HIM OVER (ADULT) (M/F) Jennifer knew she could win Mr. Johnson over. "Stacy was my daughter; you're renting her old room" Mr. Johnson explained. "I can't spank you!" "But I WANT you to spank me", Jennifer insisted. "I want you to spank me just like you used to spank Stacy". Mr. Johnson knew HE'D spilled the water on the counter, not Jennifer. It had only taken a few seconds to mop up. Jennifer was the most responsible, focused, persuasive, and well organized young woman he had ever met. Why did she want a SPANKING? "Please, Mr. Johnson", Jennifer pleaded. "I want you to spank me like Stacy". "And you need to do it tonight". Mr. Johnson stroked his chin thoughtfully. "Are you sure, Jennifer?" he asked. "When I spanked Stacy I didn't stop until there were real tears" he warned. Jennifer's stomach knotted. She had been hoping that the spanking might be a tad less draconian that the butt blisterings Stacy had endured. But Jennifer wasn't going to quibble when she was so close to victory. "Yes sir", she said tentatively, as if she could hardly believe her own voice. "I don't want you to hold back". "I want real tears, and corner time, just like Stacy". "It's not a spanking unless it's given on bare skin", Mr. Johnson added, trying not to smile. Jennifer flushed. "TOTALLY bare?" she whined. "But..." "Bare or not at all" Mr. Johnson said crisply. "IF I do this you'll be naked from the waist down". Jennifer face was crimson. BARE BOTTOM? She was 21! How humiliating! Bare or not at all? "Bare please, sir", she said meekly. "Go upstairs and put on your jammies, Jenny" Mr. Johnson ordered in his most patronizing voice. Jennifer flushed at the command but obediently scampered up the stairs. Jennifer knew she had won him over. But his stern and uncompromising tone made it clear that she was going to get it...BUT GOOD! XXX Jenny cried uncontrollably as Mr. Johnson lectured her in the most condescending tone imaginable about the damage the harmless water "might" have caused the indestructible Formica counter. Jenny knew she was innocent! But the hairbrush brooked no contradiction. As the spanks reigned down Jenny promised to be "good" like the well spanked little girl she now was. Jenny had left the window open so Steve could hear everything. She had arranged the mirrored closet door so that she could see Steve watching her punishment. Jenny wondered if Steve could see shame and humiliation in her eyes as the Mr. Johnson put her through her paces. The hairbrush was making her wiggle and squirm and kick and she was now showing Steve far more than she intended. Steve hadn't dated anyone since Stacy had left for college, and the handsome 21 year old had shown no interest in Jennifer. But Stacy had told Jennifer what her former boyfriend liked. Jennifer had never imagined that her spanking would be so painful and humiliating. But Jennifer knew she could win Steve over.
Haley Brimley email
LoL... the writing itself might use a little adjustment for what concerns vocabulary, but that's a detail. It is, on the other hand, straightforward and nicely descriptive. The story's peek is the grotesquely enticing plot that unfolds, especially in the finale. Entertaining and very "bratty".
Alex Birch email
This story is quite amusing and the wide credibility gap of Mr Johnson agreeing to a quite irrational request can be ignored (at least by this reviewer) in the interests of a fun story. It is slightly cumbersome in places and gives the impression of being hastily contrived but all in all it's not bad
Pablo email
A nicely manipulative (like Jennifer) bit of bait and switch, from the title onwards. We know that Mr. Johnson is being manipulated, but we don't know why until right at the end. Personally I'd say that Jennifer - quite obviously not the good girl that she seems - deserves much more than she wants for being quite so conniving. Still, it doesn't seem that Mr. Johnson is *entirely* unhappy with the arrangement. (Pablo)