A A A

Category: Child

Persistent Enchantment

Y. Lee Coyote

SSC-2004-02[Child]: Persistent Enchantment  (M/b, spank, fractured
fairytale)


My second SSC-2004 entry is another fractured fairytale and, of course,
is fiction.  It contains a scene of a spanking.  If such a subject is
offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please
leave now.  And as you might guess (or fear) is about a frog -- again.

This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited
without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if
complete including the copyright notice.

The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including
constructive criticism, and suggestions.  

E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com


Persistent Enchantment
By
Y. Lee Coyote

Once upon a time there lived an ordinary boy.  Trevor was not a prince
nor was he happy.  His parents decided that the place for a vacation was
a cabin in the forest -- days away from everyone else in the world.  It
took him only three days to discover that there was but one thing that
was fun -- playing by the pond.  Unfortunately, that was on the top of
the list of places he was forbidden to go.

Once again he had gone there this very morning and his father caught
him.  Before you could say Rumpelstiltskin his shorts and briefs were
yanked down and he was getting another OTK spanking for being
disobedient.  This was the fourth this week and so it was a long, hard
spanking that made him cry.

After lunch, he was sent out into the clearing to play -- by himself.
Bored he went back to the pond and found a frog.  This frog was more
playful than the others he had caught.  In fact this one did not try to
evade him like the others had and even croaked at him.  When the frog
shot out its tongue to catch a fly it almost hit him in the face.  When
Trevor opened his mouth the frog's tongue shot out again and hit his.
They were pulled together until their lips touched in a French kiss.

**** !!!! FLASH !!!! ****

Trevor felt strange.  He was looking at a naked boy.  Then he realized
that he was on, rather than in, his own clothes. <<What the fuck!?>> 
he tried to say but all that came out was "Croak, Croak, Croak."

The boy started to get dressed in his clothes.  "Thanks a lot.  I've
been stuck as a frog since last summer.  It's a strange enchantment --
just kiss a boy and you'll be free.  The flies are best at the south end
but watch out for Kai.  That snake really wants to eat you -- alive."
The boy laughed.

Trevor's dad was watching for him and when he returned to the clearing
he was caught.  "I just don't know what to do with you, boy.  The pond
is very dangerous.  Since spanking does not seem to impress you, I'll
just have to use the strap."  With that he pulled the boy's shorts down
again, bent him over a fallen tree and strapped him long and hard.  The
boy was bawling uncontrollably.

When he stopped crying, he heard: "I hope that teaches you not to go to
the pond by yourself, son."

"Yes, father.  I'll never want to see that pond again."  And, true to
his word, he never went there again for he was afraid that he might meet
an persistently enchanted frog and get kissed.


The End

© Copyright A.I.L.  June 2, 2004

Joni

You never disappoint, Y Lee. Turning a happily-ever-after fairy tale into "I'll never play by the pond again, I've learned my lesson about kissing frogs" elevates this to the level of all your Three Bears Story. Thank you for this -- you are making my reading for the story contest quite entertaining.

J*ni

Tami

Applause given for the fairy tale twist. And hear I thought only little girls liked kissing frogs. Shows how much I know. Thank you for this amusing story, Nice Job.

Tami

Sarah Nada

A clever twist on a classic fairy tale plot, including two whole spankings and one of the squickier kisses I've ever encountered in a spanking story. <g> Well done.

Sarah