Category: Child
Persistent Enchantment
SSC-2004-02[Child]: Persistent Enchantment (M/b, spank, fractured fairytale) My second SSC-2004 entry is another fractured fairytale and, of course, is fiction. It contains a scene of a spanking. If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. And as you might guess (or fear) is about a frog -- again. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com Persistent Enchantment By Y. Lee Coyote Once upon a time there lived an ordinary boy. Trevor was not a prince nor was he happy. His parents decided that the place for a vacation was a cabin in the forest -- days away from everyone else in the world. It took him only three days to discover that there was but one thing that was fun -- playing by the pond. Unfortunately, that was on the top of the list of places he was forbidden to go. Once again he had gone there this very morning and his father caught him. Before you could say Rumpelstiltskin his shorts and briefs were yanked down and he was getting another OTK spanking for being disobedient. This was the fourth this week and so it was a long, hard spanking that made him cry. After lunch, he was sent out into the clearing to play -- by himself. Bored he went back to the pond and found a frog. This frog was more playful than the others he had caught. In fact this one did not try to evade him like the others had and even croaked at him. When the frog shot out its tongue to catch a fly it almost hit him in the face. When Trevor opened his mouth the frog's tongue shot out again and hit his. They were pulled together until their lips touched in a French kiss. **** !!!! FLASH !!!! **** Trevor felt strange. He was looking at a naked boy. Then he realized that he was on, rather than in, his own clothes. <<What the fuck!?>> he tried to say but all that came out was "Croak, Croak, Croak." The boy started to get dressed in his clothes. "Thanks a lot. I've been stuck as a frog since last summer. It's a strange enchantment -- just kiss a boy and you'll be free. The flies are best at the south end but watch out for Kai. That snake really wants to eat you -- alive." The boy laughed. Trevor's dad was watching for him and when he returned to the clearing he was caught. "I just don't know what to do with you, boy. The pond is very dangerous. Since spanking does not seem to impress you, I'll just have to use the strap." With that he pulled the boy's shorts down again, bent him over a fallen tree and strapped him long and hard. The boy was bawling uncontrollably. When he stopped crying, he heard: "I hope that teaches you not to go to the pond by yourself, son." "Yes, father. I'll never want to see that pond again." And, true to his word, he never went there again for he was afraid that he might meet an persistently enchanted frog and get kissed. The End © Copyright A.I.L. June 2, 2004
Joni email
You never disappoint, Y Lee. Turning a happily-ever-after fairy tale into "I'll never play by the pond again, I've learned my lesson about kissing frogs" elevates this to the level of all your Three Bears Story. Thank you for this -- you are making my reading for the story contest quite entertaining.
J*ni
Tami email
Applause given for the fairy tale twist. And hear I thought only little girls liked kissing frogs. Shows how much I know. Thank you for this amusing story, Nice Job.
Tami
Sarah Nada email
A clever twist on a classic fairy tale plot, including two whole spankings and one of the squickier kisses I've ever encountered in a spanking story. <g> Well done.
Sarah