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Category: Child

First Adult Decision

Y. Lee Coyote

SSC-2004-05[Child]:  First Adult Decision  (Machine/t, strap) 

My fifth SSC-2004 entry was inspired by the Nudie Juvie Story Festival
that Nialos Learning setup (www.asstr.org/~nialos/nudie_juvie.html).  In
this universe not only are juveniles punished by spanking they are
forced to be nude and must also submit to peers.  The JPC is a Judicial
Punishment Center that provides both spanking by machines and does the
paper work.  If such subjects are offensive, uninteresting or if you are
a minor (i.e., child) please leave now.

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First Adult Decision
By
Y. Lee Coyote

Ken knew he was in deep trouble even before he got home -- it was more
than an hour past his curfew, even with the extra hour allowed on
non-school nights. His parents had told him exactly what his punishment
would be should he be late again.  When he got up it was already noon
and only his kid sister, Lizzie, was home.  As he munched his toast he
decided what he would do.  He would prove to his parents that he really
was growing up and how mature he was.

An hour later, fourteen year old Ken and ten year old Lizzie were in
line at the JPC.  The bored clerk immediately told him that he needed to
be sixteen to bring a kid in for punishment.  She showed more interest
when Ken explained that he was here for himself and without any
paperwork.  After a long discussion the supervisor approved his request.

Ken was soon in the spanking machine.  Lizzie watched from the visitors'
gallery.  He howled like a coyote as the strap smashed into his butt
fourteen times with great force turning his bottom crimson.  He was
proud of himself that he did not cry as he had only a few months
earlier.

The nurse checked him and declared that he could go home.  The exit
clerk snapped the punishment band on his wrist.  He held the papers in
his hand as he did not have any pockets.  He could have the band removed
Wednesday afternoon at school.  Ken and his sister left with her
carrying his shirt and jeans in the JPC bag.  He would be naked for four
days.  But he would be dressed for the big game on Wednesday night.  A
detail which he figured he did not have to mention to his parents.

As they walked  home through the park, Lizzie felt his butt.  "It's
really hot Ken.  I bet it hurts but you did not cry like last time." she
said cheerfully.  I saw several of the big guys crying today.  "And your
pee-pee is bigger too.  Jenny is going to have some fun with it.  She'll
like all that hair too."  Evidently people were getting use to naked
kids for he noted how much less attention he attracted than a year ago.
The few kids that came over were easily shooed away by Lizzie who
understood the value of reciprocal protection.

His parents were dumbfounded enough not to lecture him and he did
homework rather than venture out to be teased by his friends.  He would
deal with his sister's friend, Jenny, tomorrow.  Little girls could be
such pests especially those without brothers but it could be fun.  She
did have hot little hands.

The End

© Copyright A.I.L.  June 21, 2004

Y.

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Haley

LOL... Brilliant. Indeed inspired by the Nudie Juvie, but with some cool twists to it. Also kind of reminded me of the "Melody" series. But even without bringing up such noble comparisons, it is an enjoyable, brisk and to-the-point story. Well done.

Ivy

A pretty great story, the whole spanking machine part reminds me of one of the first series of I read of Melody and the rejuves. I like the idea of children taking the responsibility for his own action. I also thought it was funny that he chose to take his ten year-old sister with him to the spanking place. A decently well-written story, in my opinion.

Pablo

This is a *strange* world, and it really needs a lot more explanation and motivation than is possible in a single 500-word piece. The matter-of-fact expression of childhood sexuality in particular is somewhat unsettling. There's a lot of great potential for exploring dystopian (assuming one imagines that it *is* dystopian) alternate-reality spanko worlds like this one, but this really only just scratches the surface. It's a slightly flat telling, too. There seems to be little room for emotion in this world; it's a bit *too* everyday. I see that it's meant to fit into a much larger story-world, but that makes it not such a good subject for an SSC story. (Pablo)