Category: Child
First Adult Decision
SSC-2004-05[Child]: First Adult Decision (Machine/t, strap) My fifth SSC-2004 entry was inspired by the Nudie Juvie Story Festival that Nialos Learning setup (www.asstr.org/~nialos/nudie_juvie.html). In this universe not only are juveniles punished by spanking they are forced to be nude and must also submit to peers. The JPC is a Judicial Punishment Center that provides both spanking by machines and does the paper work. If such subjects are offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com First Adult Decision By Y. Lee Coyote Ken knew he was in deep trouble even before he got home -- it was more than an hour past his curfew, even with the extra hour allowed on non-school nights. His parents had told him exactly what his punishment would be should he be late again. When he got up it was already noon and only his kid sister, Lizzie, was home. As he munched his toast he decided what he would do. He would prove to his parents that he really was growing up and how mature he was. An hour later, fourteen year old Ken and ten year old Lizzie were in line at the JPC. The bored clerk immediately told him that he needed to be sixteen to bring a kid in for punishment. She showed more interest when Ken explained that he was here for himself and without any paperwork. After a long discussion the supervisor approved his request. Ken was soon in the spanking machine. Lizzie watched from the visitors' gallery. He howled like a coyote as the strap smashed into his butt fourteen times with great force turning his bottom crimson. He was proud of himself that he did not cry as he had only a few months earlier. The nurse checked him and declared that he could go home. The exit clerk snapped the punishment band on his wrist. He held the papers in his hand as he did not have any pockets. He could have the band removed Wednesday afternoon at school. Ken and his sister left with her carrying his shirt and jeans in the JPC bag. He would be naked for four days. But he would be dressed for the big game on Wednesday night. A detail which he figured he did not have to mention to his parents. As they walked home through the park, Lizzie felt his butt. "It's really hot Ken. I bet it hurts but you did not cry like last time." she said cheerfully. I saw several of the big guys crying today. "And your pee-pee is bigger too. Jenny is going to have some fun with it. She'll like all that hair too." Evidently people were getting use to naked kids for he noted how much less attention he attracted than a year ago. The few kids that came over were easily shooed away by Lizzie who understood the value of reciprocal protection. His parents were dumbfounded enough not to lecture him and he did homework rather than venture out to be teased by his friends. He would deal with his sister's friend, Jenny, tomorrow. Little girls could be such pests especially those without brothers but it could be fun. She did have hot little hands. The End © Copyright A.I.L. June 21, 2004 Y. Valid return address is <YLeeCoyote at mail dot com> (Posting address is for the spammers) See my stories at http://www.asstr.org/~YLeeCoyote/ See Goldilocks stories at http://www.geocities.com/goldilocks1938/
Haley email
LOL... Brilliant. Indeed inspired by the Nudie Juvie, but with some cool twists to it. Also kind of reminded me of the "Melody" series. But even without bringing up such noble comparisons, it is an enjoyable, brisk and to-the-point story. Well done.
Ivy email
A pretty great story, the whole spanking machine part reminds me of one of the first series of I read of Melody and the rejuves. I like the idea of children taking the responsibility for his own action. I also thought it was funny that he chose to take his ten year-old sister with him to the spanking place. A decently well-written story, in my opinion.
Pablo email
This is a *strange* world, and it really needs a lot more explanation and motivation than is possible in a single 500-word piece. The matter-of-fact expression of childhood sexuality in particular is somewhat unsettling. There's a lot of great potential for exploring dystopian (assuming one imagines that it *is* dystopian) alternate-reality spanko worlds like this one, but this really only just scratches the surface. It's a slightly flat telling, too. There seems to be little room for emotion in this world; it's a bit *too* everyday. I see that it's meant to fit into a much larger story-world, but that makes it not such a good subject for an SSC story. (Pablo)