Category: Child
Persistent Enchantment -- 2
SSC-2004-06[Child]: Persistent Enchantment -- 2 (F/g, spank, fractured fairytale) In my earlier SSC-2004 entry "Persistent Enchantment" I created a fractured fairy tale universe where a kiss with the enchanted frog caused a body swap. Trevor, the latest victim of the spell, has now been a frog for a few weeks. This is, of course, fiction. It contains a scene of a spanking. If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com Persistent Enchantment -- 2 By Y. Lee Coyote Trevor was not a happy puppy, er, frog. This morning he was particularly depressed for last night had been cold, chilling him to the very marrow of his bones and it had been a full moon so that he had to be very careful with the hunters about. It also meant that summer was waning and that his own body had returned to the city totally out of reach. Mid-morning he was stretched out on a rock trying to get warm enough to snap at fly or two. He was hoping for a boy, any boy, to kiss. Rose was out exploring this morning. She was the with her family staying in the cabin but Trevor knew nothing of this. He was just basking in the sun when she spotted him. Fast as lighting, she reached out and grabbed him. She practically crushed him. "What a cute frog. I wonder if this is an enchanted prince. And with that she kissed him before he could even wonder if she had a brother. At that very moment her mother back in the cabin glanced out the window and saw her daughter raise a frog to her face. She sighed with disgust and turned to tend to Teddy. She'll deal with Rose later. Once again Trevor experienced that flash and discovered that he was back in human form. As he dressed and explained to the new victim what had happened, he realized that he was missing some very important parts. He almost grabbed the frog to switch back but he knew winter was coming soon and perhaps being a girl was better than being a frog. And at least he would not be spanked because, as boys well know, girls are always good and thus not spanked. He, er, she then heard the call for lunch and ran for the house. Rose's mother was very angry. "Young lady, how many times have I told you not to play with frogs? I even saw you kissing one before; do you want to get WARTS on your face?" Without waiting for an answer she sat down, raised Rose's dress and lowered her panties and pulled her over her lap for a long hard spanking. Trevor was shocked. Soon Rose was bawling and the spanking stopped. She had to do thirty minutes in the corner with her dress pined up before she could have lunch. Teddy enjoyed the sight of Rosy's rosy buns as much as he had enjoyed watching her being spanked long and hard. Trevor mussed on how wrong he was about girls not being spanked and worried how he could he become a boy again. The End © Copyright A.I.L. June 26, 2004 Y. Valid return address is <YLeeCoyote at mail dot com> (Posting address is for the spammers) See my stories at http://www.asstr.org/~YLeeCoyote/ See Goldilocks stories at http://www.geocities.com/goldilocks1938/
Eric
Most spanking stories have as their basis the consequences of flouting authority. 'Persistent Enchantment 2' features a child's disobedience, but this reviewer saw another, more subtle, form of rebellion. A few centuries ago it may have raised the ire of established religious bodies. Life mutating between human and animal form could have been interpreted as challenging the supremacy of man. Paganism's joust at the church. 'Persistent Enchantment 2' can be read as an interesting example of subversive writing.
Tami email
The fairy tale continues, with another element of fantasy. But I'm still staying away from frogs. A delightful tale. Nice Job.
Tami
John Benson email
The first one of these 'enchanted frog' tales was a real hoot. This one didn't work nearly so well.
--johnb