Category: Child
A Short Spanking Story
Fifteen-year-old Sheri stared at the blank screen. All she had typed so far was "SSC2004: A Short Spanking Story [M/f]." Writer's block. Maybe something from real life, thought Shari. After all, her whole fascination with spankings started when Frank, her new stepdad, introduced his budding 12-year-old stepdaughter to bare-bottom spankings... "What're you writing, Shari?" Shari jumped at the sound of Frank's voice from behind. Busted! He'd caught his stepdaughter viewing a spanko website once before, giving her a stern warning. No warning this time! The Marine's big hand wrapped around her upper arm, lifting her out of the chair, briefly permitting her only one tiptoe on the floor. Over his lap she went in a well-practiced minuet, panties down. A jolt of electricity crackled up her spine when his hand came down--a sensation familiar yet breathtakingly stunning. Primitive survival instincts made her fight Frank. Kicking her legs spastically, she howled and squirmed. For this, Frank spanked her all the harder--until the willful child surrendered unconditionally, her red bottom pliable and well on its way to a good bruising. After Frank left, Sheri had sobbed to near exhaustion. But then she sat on a pillow and tapped at the keys: "Fifteen-year-old Sheri stared at the blank screen. All she had typed so far..."
Polara email
This story reminds me that I was kinky long before I was a grown-up. I particularly like the choice of words "one tiptoe on the floor" and "well-practiced minuet, panties down." Here the author has found fresh words for actions that have been described so very, very often. On the other hand, these words don't sound like fifteen-year-old Sheri's words, which the ending implies that they are. I can't see any fifteen-year-old voluntarily describing herself as a child.
Sarah Nada email
Very well written, with a crisply described spanking an unusually self-possessed young heroine.
Sarah
Haley Brimley email
This is one of the best entries in the Child category for this year. I've never been a fan of such "loop" stories, for they tend to be extremely messy -- but this is SO not the case. The author managed to portray a fun, thrilling, even sweet scenario with few words, and to wrap it up beautifully in a the-beginning-is-the-end kind of setting. And still, the plot is linear and woven in such a fashion that it's easy to read, and to enjoy. A truly lovely story.