Category: Childspecial
A Visit from the Tooth Fairy
SSC-2004-08[Child]: A Visit from the Tooth Fairy Do you believe in the Tooth Fairy? Did you once believe? I guess that this is a fairy tale because it about a fairy but I don't think that it is fractured. It is story which is, of course, fiction. It contains a scene of a spanking. If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com A Visit from the Tooth Fairy By Y. Lee Coyote Jar was not a believer in Santa, Jack Frost nor, especially, the Tooth Fairy. He was coming up on twelve and just had one more baby tooth to shed. He was very anxious to become a man and baby teeth did not fit his self-image. His kid brother, Kenny, was quite the opposite. He was almost six, anxiously awaiting the lost of his first baby tooth and the monetary gift from the Tooth Fairy he had heard so much about. He had already knew what toy he wanted. What Jar could not seem to understand was how wrong it was to destroy the innocent joys of childhood that his adoring little brother had. As fate would have it, the first and last drop outs occurred on the same day. Kenny was thrilled. The Tooth Fairy would be visiting him tonight! Jar was glad the event was over and pooh-poohed the existence of the winged creature. He was far too old for that kiddy stuff. Kenny didn't have to be told to go to bed even once this night. He even brushed his remaining teeth and put the treasured one under his pillow. A few hours later Jar retired; his tooth was in the trash. It was about an hour later, with the full moon lighting the room, that the Tooth Fairy come into the room. This was not a tiny little fairy like Tinkerbelle but a super large size one. He was a bit clumsy however, and Kenny felt him reach under his pillow and replace the tooth with big heavy coins. Jar was awaken by the crashing of his books that a large wing knocked off his desk. He was too stunned to yell but just watched the creature approach him. The covers were pulled back, exposing the petrified boy. The Tooth Fairy sat down and pulled the boy over his lap. He pulled the super hero briefs down exposing the target bottom. Then he began to spank the boy. He spanked hard. As he spanked he lectured. "So the Tooth Fairy does not exist, boy. Then you won't feel this spanking. But it's for being mean to your little brother." Jar did feel the spanking. It was long and hard and he cried. The Tooth Fairy stopped spanking and went to the window. Second later he disappeared. Kenny ran to the window to watch but could not see the Tooth Fairy any more. Still clutching his new gained coins in his fist, he went to his sobbing big brother and gave him a hug. "I guess I was wrong, Kenny. The Tooth Fairy does exist. What did you get?" The little boy looked and said: "Three quarters." "No, those are not quarters. Those are dollars. You got three whole dollars. WOW!" "And all you got was a spanking. Here have one." "Thanks but no, I got what I deserved, you keep your money." He hugged his loving brother. Their parents, listening outside the door smiled at how well the plan worked. The End © Copyright A.I.L. July 6, 2004 Y. Valid return address is <YLeeCoyote at mail dot com> (Posting address is for the spammers) See my stories at http://www.asstr.org/~YLeeCoyote/ See Goldilocks stories at http://www.geocities.com/goldilocks1938/
Hal email
This was a cute story that had more then just spanking in it. It had a lesson. I enjoyed reading this story. There was also come nice word pictures painted in this story. This was a very believable story. The writer had a good pace in their writing. The story flowed nicely all the way to the end. I look forward to reading more by this writer.
SirHal
John Benson email
Cute. I'm not quite sure how the clumsy fairy made it out the window, but that's okay. Some kids just need to be taught a lesson.
--johnb
Polara email
Oh, brothers! I would have liked to have seen some dialog or a short bit of action showing how Jar was mean to Kenny rather than just having it referred to indirectly. But that's enough "constructive criticism." I'm giving this one ++ for originality, it really tickled my funny bone.