Category: Childshortlisted
Breaking the rules
The heavy oak door creaked open leaving the headmaster's study looking bright, but not welcoming, and as Laura walked through the door her heart was right in the pit of her stomach. The headmaster paused, and asked in a voice of pure calm, 'Do you know why you are here?' It was hard to argue with the facts, she had been caught cheating on the exam, and she knew that she shouldn't have, but surely the punishment that was about to be given was for first-formers, not grown-up prefects. 'Yes, I do sir.' Came the clear reply, as Laura still didn't believe that she was about to be given the self same punishment she had effectively wielded in her year as a prefect. Of course she knew the rules well enough, all the girls at St. Augusta's did. 'The prefects have power over the younger girls. If the girls are caught breaking the rules, they are to be punished The school line was brutal, and Laura had used it's words well, sending many a troublesome child to the headmaster's office, and knowing full well the real punishment they were about to receive. The creaking door, shrieking through every corridor of the ancient building, was a rallying call to anybody who wanted to see the caning being given, as the door was always kept wide open during punishments. Many a girl 'just happened' to walk past that door after hearing that sound, slowing just enough to catch their brief glimpse. 'Discipline will be given, and be seen to be given.' gloated the school prospectus. 'Laura, it pains me to have to do this to you, but you know the rules' he said sternly, and Laura did what she knew now that she must. Walking now with shaking steps towards the leather-topped desk, and pulling up the hem of her green-checked summer-skirt just above the curve of her pert, now goose-pimpled buttocks, her blue eyes just visible through the fringe of her mousy brown hair, she bent forward to assume the position she had seen so many times before. The sound of footsteps moving around behind her, and the gentle swish of the cane against the weathered hand of the headmaster served as a percussion to the flowing, practiced words, as the headmaster began his usual routine, as polished as ever, and Laura knew every word off by heart. She could feel his eyes burning into her, and hesitated a little before her quivering fingers slowly pushed her white cotton panties down her thighs. She bared her bottom, in all it's glory, to the eyes of the girls she knew she could hear, but not see. The shame ate into her as their footsteps clicked along the corridor. It was inevitable now, and she tensed, preparing for the worst, however as the speech reached it's conclusion, silence filling every inch of the office, the headmaster paused before striking his blow. 'No', he said, taking a deep breath. 'for this Laura, I think we need to be alone', and the heavy door creaked it's way shut
Polara email
Starts in the middle, stops before the end but still creates a nice, tense, anticipatory atmosphere. It really feels like a slice out of time. I particularly like the sentence "Discipline will be given, and be seen to be given," gloated the school prospectus."
(An unimportant but distracting grammar glitch: "it's" means "it is". "Belonging to it" is spelled without an apostrophe, thus: its words, its glory, its way.)
Ivy Tran email
I think that this is a great story. Its well tweaked and a good read. I love the ominous perils associated with headmasters. On the other hand why are headmasters always betrayed at the guy everyone should be scared of? The school girl theme will never grow old! I love it! Amazing details and great plot line with the creaking old door.
Sarah Nada email
School stories don't generally do much for me, but I liked this one a lot. The writing is crisp and descriptive, and the unresolved twist at the end left me thinking about the story for some time after I finished reading it. Nicely done.
Sarah