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Spanked By Mr. Schneider

Natty

Spanked by Mr. Schneider [M/f, child 500 words]


I always used to think about it. Getting spanked by Mr. Schneider.

It started when we were reading To Kill A Mockingbird in my language
arts class and Hillary Hanson asked what it meant when Scout said
Atticus threatened to "wear us out." Mr. Schneider got a funny grin on
his face.

"That means he's going to whip their hide."

It made me giggle. Especially when he looked at me after he said it.
Made me dream at night that he was my dad and whipping my hide with his
belt.

This one day in class my friends, Tim and Cameron, and I were playing
Paper, Rock, Scissor when we were supposed to be working on our
vocabulary worksheets.

"Paper." I looked up as I slapped my right hand down on my left hand.
Tim and Cameron were turned around in their desks. Mr. Schneider was
scowling at me.

"Melissa, I want to see you after class." I gulped and went back to
figuring out Latin prefixes with a hot/cold tingly feeling.

He closed the door when everyone left. It was lunchtime so there wasn't
another class coming.

"Explain to me why you weren't doing your work." He unbuttoned the
cuffs of his shirt. Rolled them up to his elbows.

"I dunno." I looked down at the cream linoleum swirling around my desk.

"Not the answer I was looking for, young lady." He unbuckled his belt
and slid it through the loops of his gray slacks. My eyes felt big
inside my head. "Stand up. Pull your jeans and underwear down and bend
over the desk."

I stood up. Looked at him. My bottom lip started wiggling and my eyes
got all teary. But I just stood there. Hoping he'd change his mind and
wouldn't make me do something so embarrassing.

"Do as I asked, please." Forceful, but in the same tone of voice. I
whimpered. Sniffled. Unbuttoned my jeans. "We both know you deserve
this." He had that funny grin again. Made him seem like one of those
guys my mother said lurked in the woods behind our apartments. I bent
over the desk with my naked behind in full view. Hoping to God nobody
walked in at that moment. Praying to God somebody would.

The splat of the belt echoed in the room. And it stung like hell. But
it was when he rubbed my bottom after the first couple of whacks that I
started crying. He hit me a few more times. Then stopped and rubbed
again. More whacks. More rubbing. I think he gave me about twenty
whacks in all. I was really crying by the end.

"Shhh..." He gave me his handkerchief. Pulled me against him. Rubbed my
back and bottom. When I stopped crying, he told me I could go to lunch.
"The State allows me to use corporal punishment. So be a good girl."
With that same grin.

I still think about it. Mr. Schneider spanking me.

But now I just feel icky. 


Copyright 2004 Natty

John Benson

Well, now I feel all icky, too.

This is a very brave story, very hard hitting. It violates the unwritten rule of our genere that the victim is supposed to like (or crave, or respect, or at least eroticize) her abuse. As such, it's probably a very realistic story, written with such vivid detail that it could very well be a remembrance. Well done.

--johnb

Eric

Short sentences, almost journalistic in style. Pruned of all unnecessary verbeage. A believable, if slightly exaggerated, scenario. But most importantly, a very easy style of writing to follow. Not once did this reviewer need to pause and ponder the meaning of any sentence in 'Spanked by Mr. Schneider'. An outstanding example of storytelling at its best.

Trisha Allen

Loved this story! It was written in such a way, that it seemed real. It's so easy to visualize from the description and the portraying of the girl's emotions. Great story! Keep writing please!