Category: Childshortlisted
Meeting of the Minds
"Kyle, can we talk?" I asked from the doorway of his office. My stepdad runs his consulting business from our home, so he enforced my punishment. I wasn't allowed out of my room except to go to the bathroom. Not today. Not tomorrow. Not for another week. I couldn't even get dressed; I wore an extra-large purple T-shirt and slippers. Kyle turned from his computer and I expected to see a scowl. Instead, he smiled slightly. "Actually, Kim, I wanted to talk to you." I sat on the other chair, not knowing how to start. "Look, yesterday, while you were out, I did something bad," I began. "I used your computer without permission." He nodded, as if he didn't seem very surprised. "Look, I know you think mom's too lenient. You don't say much. But I know how you feel." "Do you really?" "Yeah, I think so. When you were 13, I bet your dad would have spanked you for what I did. Right?" Kyle nodded. "Well, that's why I used your computer," I explained. "I wanted to see if teenagers get spanked these days, like when you were a kid. And you know what? There's lots of websites that say teens get spanked. In fact, the hardest thing for lots of teens is asking their parents to spank them. Especially if they haven't ever been spanked before..." I paused. Kyle nodded. "I knew you used my computer. And I looked at your websites. I don't think teens should have to ask. Parents should simply act. Unfortunately, I'm not your real dad and things aren't that simple." "They can be simple for you and me," I replied. "Dad." He looked into my eyes and I knew we understood each other. Mom wouldn't be home for another hour. "I'll tell your mother that two days of grounding is enough," he said. "She'll agree. She's permissive." "Thanks, dad," I said, standing up. "I guess the only issue is whether you're too old for the kind of 'pants-downers' I used to get," he said as I approached his lap. "I've figured that out too," I said as I went over his lap, placing my hands flat on the floor which pulled up my purple T-shirt in back so Kyle could see I didn't have panties on. Mom was surprised at Kyle's change of heart when she returned from shopping. I was surprised how long and hard Kyle spanked me, how it hurt all day long, how I could still see the discoloration the next day. I think Kyle was surprised how well I took my spanking and how I never begged him to stop, no matter how hard I cried or how much it hurt. I think he was surprised that I never told mom. Not that spanking. Not the next one a few days later. Not all the spankings he gave me right up till I left for college.
John Benson email
This works. It fits comfortably into its format, and has a story we'd like to believe is true. I wanted to shout hurray for the girl who has the guts to ask for what she needs.
Hooray for the writer, too.
--johnb
Polara email
This story intrigues me. On the surface the teenager and stepdad easily reach an understanding; but there is a dash of complicity, perhaps in their choosing to conceal their understanding from the other parent, that makes me wonder if there is more to the relationship. And who's really taking the initiative? Subtle and well-written.
Trisha Allen email
Great entry! It's not everyday that a thirteen-year-old girl gets alone that well with a step dad. It appears the spankings also drew them closer over the years. Well written and very imaginable. A very nice touch!