Category: Edgeshortlistedspecial
Behind the Books
Behind the Books (Edge) Hide and seek. A game of childhood, filled with breathless, heart-pounding silence followed by shrieks of discovery. Everyone has a favourite hiding spot. If you play long enough, you get to know where to look for your best friend. Madeleine and Anneliese played every day, whispering and laughing and making a nuisance of themselves until her father threatened to blister them both if they didn't find somewhere else to play. They retreated up the stairs. That was a long time ago. Now it seemed the whole city was playing hide and seek. Madeleine missed her playmate. They hadn't seen one another for months. There were no games any more, not since the soldiers came. One night they came to her house for her father and mother and for her. It was a nightmare, the kind that wakes you up sweating. Maddie lifted her head and tried to see but her eyes were swollen from the blows and tears. She felt the bruises on her bottom and back but even if she hadn't been bound, she was too tired to think of rubbing them. She searched for something to see, to understand, but there was only the dark. The floor creaked, a tiny flame flickered and the cigarette sprang to life. The light above her snapped on. "Filthy girl," the voice sneered. Suddenly she felt heat in her lap. She'd wet herself. "I told you so." He pulled her from the seat and pushed her face down over the chair. It stank. "No, please!" she begged. "Where?" "I don't know!" He pulled a strap from the wall and began whipping her again, but she was barely able to cry out any more. She was scared and weak enough now but pain wasn't getting results. He walked to the table, chose a long hypodermic syringe, checked to see that there were no bubbles and plunged the needle into Maddie's arm. Blood spurted across his brown shirt. He slapped her. "Where?" Hide and seek. Hide and seek. The drug took hold. "Come find me, Madeleine!" She raced through the house, following the voice. She was getting closer. "I know where you are, Anne," she laughed, "I know where you are " Up the stairs. Behind the books. - - - - - - "That was brilliant, Maddie." Henry grabbed a sponge and began wiping. Madeleine spat the remaining blood from her mouth and rubbed her wrists. Her great-grandmother's diary was not famous like Anne's. It was instead a little treasure filled with big secrets, and now it was all hers. "It was hard," she answered slowly, looking across the room to the thin volume on the top shelf. "When can we do it again?" (450 words)
Chantymer email
Good storyline, captures the reader's attention, keeping you holding your breath in anticipation, wondering where your friend has gone. It is slightly edgy.
Alex Birch email
This was a really difficult story to review and understand. Not because of its subject matter but because it's a little hard to determine quite what was fact or fantasy. Was her great grandmother really a friend of Anne Frank? Did the diary contain a similar story to Anne's or was it a very personal diary of deeply personal masochistic desires and needs played out in another generation between consenting adults? The story is hard and brutal but well written and extremely enigmatic. There are enough leads and possibilities here to tax a Hercule Poirot. I dont really think this is a spanking story per se, but a story which includes some sadistic/masochistic interplay but that is not to detract from it in any way. It is well written and is one of those tales one could read over several times and take a different path to the truth..which is a credit to the writer.
Pablo email
A fantastically efficient, complex, multi-layered, and most of all *difficult* piece, which makes astonishing use of the space, leaves all sorts of images behind, yet retains some ambiguity. The subtleties and complexities mean that this needs to be read and reread, but also that it rewards rereading hugely. This isn't a benign passing of desire and kink across generations - it's one generation turning torture and tragedy into kink, and this belongs squarely in 'Edge'. Whether this transition seems desperately hot, or terribly disturbing, or indeed both at the same time, is something we'd have to answer for ourselves. For myself, I think this is a wonderful piece. (Pablo)