Category: First/last
Making Amends
"MAKING AMENDS" by the Crimson Kid [Category: First/Last]
(All rights reserved. This story's setting is March of 2004 at the
Royalton residence in a residential subdivision in the U.S.A.)
"Candy's a forgiving person," Barbara Royalton informed her husband,
"That's the only factor in your favor. Your conduct was inexcusable."
Facing into the bedroom corner, the seat flap of his baby blue
'Doctor Denton's' unbuttoned to expose his well-striped posterior, Paul
gulped. "But, honey--"
"The only butt I'm concerned with is yours," she interrupted, "Which
will be paying for your rudeness."
"I didn't mean to hurt Candy's feelings," he muttered.
"How should she react to your poor sportsmanship, whining about her
caning you 'too hard' when it was all in fun?" Barbara snorted.
The doorbell chimed.
"Candy," she noted, "On time for your strapping."
"She's going to watch?"
"Absolutely." Barbara departed, heading downstairs, then reappeared
momentarily accompanied by Candy.
"Hello, Paul," Candy greeted him, "Ready for a lesson in manners?"
"Yes, ma'am." He shivered.
"Mind if I witness your bare bottom being blistered?" she inquired
rhetorically.
"No, ma'am."
Striding over to him, she grasped the razor strap atop his palms then
air-snapped it sharply with a wrist-flick--CRACK!
"Nice weapon," Candy clucked. "How does it feel plastering your
defenseless derriere?"
Paul shuddered. "Like flames from hell, ma'am."
"Exactly what he deserves," Barbara interjected. "I'll take that,
Candy, while Paul assumes his proper punishment position." She accepted
the strap. "Time for hiney-scorching hellfire."
Soon she stood at bedside facing her prone husband's naked buttocks,
starkly elevated over an inverted overstuffed reading pillow, while
raising her supple instrument of correction.
"While I'm painting your seat with another layer of red-hot stripes,
darling, I want you to consider what Candy's friendship means to you."
"Yes, ma'am."
"Yours means so much to me, Paul," Candy said sincerely.
Then Barbara administered eighty-four whipping-sharp strokes of her
wickedly-flexible strap across Paul's quivering, dancing bare
buttcheeks. The deliberate, devastating leathering left him wailing and
blubbering childishly while his pretty blonde co-worker observed the
shameless howling as his teardrops splattered the bedspread.
During that chastisement, Paul reflected on how much he enjoyed and
appreciated Candy's heartfelt comradeship at work, realizing he needed
the loyalty, support and affection he received from her there. Her
teasing behavior, at times she knew his behind was sore or was soon to
be walloped, was always fondly playful--even when she was the woman
responsible for his warmly-tingling posterior.
"Stand up, young man," Barbara instructed her sobbing spouse, "Face
Candy."
"Boy, did your ever get a good bare-ass licking," the blonde
tittered.
"Ahhh-I duh-deserved ih-it," Paul admitted. "Pluh-Please fuh-forgive
me, muh-ma'am."
Leaning forward, she kissed his tear-streaked cheeks. "You're fully
forgiven, sweetheart."
"You'll still be getting it long and hard on your bare bottom from
Candy at the upcoming Sisterhood meeting," his wife announced, "Plus
receiving your usual 'reminder' hairbrushing Monday night."
"Cuh-Could Candy gih-give me th-that spanking, ma'am?"
Barbara nodded smilingly.
"W-Would you, ma'am?" Paul asked Candy.
"With pleasure." She dimpled impishly, imagining the good-natured
workplace teasing she'd be doing.
"Let's go downstairs, Candy," Barbara suggested. "Corner,
honeybun--palms up."
After he complied, she placed her Spencer paddle on his waist-level
hands.
"I'll be back..."
{The End}
Eric
Form is perhaps even more important than substance in fast-moving action stories. The writer must give careful attention to layout and punctuation if the reader's eye is to have a smooth passage. This reviewer delighted in reading 'Making Amends'. Well done.
Tami email
Very extreme, very painful, very detailed story. Chapter 2 in this saga paints a very strict but accepting relationship between a wife and her husband, with a friend of course. Wondering if/when we will see chapter 3.
Tami
Hal email
I totally enjoyed reading this story. It had a wonderful flow to it. The word pictures the author painted for us were vivid. The story line was fun to watch unfold. This was a spanking for story for those that love good spanking stories. It had all of the elements that make a spanking story so enjoyable to us. I sure hope this author continues to write stories for us. I really like to structure of this story. It made it so easy to follow and enjoy. On a personal note, I think eighty-four with a razor strap might put this is the "Edge" category, but what do I know.
SirHal