Category: First/last
Fulfillment
'FULFILLMENT' by Alex Birch Category: First and Last Words: 499 Rosemary sleepwalked through her husband's funeral. Thirty years of loving companionship wiped out by a coronary in an instant, two weeks after her 50th birthday. She'd have crumbled but for her son , so strong when it mattered. Determined to cope she applied for a job, digging up her secretarial qualifications long dormant, and applied to a small firm of solicitors. Rosemary warmed to Mr Phillips at the interview. Around her own age, greying and very distinguished, the twinkle in his eye made her feel quite light headed, and she was overjoyed to be offered the post despite her age. Weeks went by and she gathered from office gossip that her boss was divorced. He was viewed as very 'tasty' and the girls sometimes exchanged blushing glances but would say no more. Rosemary's working relationship with him was wonderful and, she realised guiltily, she took his generosity for granted. She took an afternoon off to meet an old friend, feigning sickness, but worked twice as hard next day to catch up. The next day he had been to a business dinner and Rosemary was leaning over her desk reading a magazine way after lunch was over. She heard him come back but was determined to finish the article as he walked past her desk. Without warning she suddenly experienced a sharp slap on her bottom. For a second she was stunned and very confused as her bottom tingled delightfully. She meant to say "How dare you!" but instead she rubbed her bottom and said plaintively "That hurt!!" There was no apology, instead he grinned. "Good..he said firmly "..I dont pay you to read magazines in the firm's time. Now come into my office , we have things to discuss!" Like a small child sent to her room, Rosemary followed him in, heart pounding, strange feelings coursing through her body. " The magazine is not your worst offence! Do you know what happens to secretaries who behave like little girls, who lie to me about being sick and who are then spotted in a pub? " he demanded. Rosemary was like a rabbit trapped in headlights, incapable of logical thought or movement as she stared into his eyes and whimpered something. He seized her hand gently, for she made no attempt to escape, and pulled her toward him. "They get their knickers taken down and their bare bottoms smacked!" he smiled as he hauled her gently over his knee and to Rosemary's embarrassment began to pull up her skirt . A million thoughts flew through her mind as the shame of what was happening sank in. I'm 50 years old being treated like a child..and its turning me on! Im betraying my dear husband's memory..what if my son found out ..what if..." She turned her head in despair as he began to ease her knickers down but the thrill in her loins was inescapable. "Please Mr Phillips..." she whimpered "..what if somebody hears?" He began to laugh. "Frankly my dear.." he replied "..I dont give a damn!"
Haley Brimley email
A few parts are absolutely delightful, others gave me the feeling "it could be better but it's not"... but I suppose it's because of the 500 word limit. Rosemary's inner workings (thoughts, emotions, etc.) are very well written, and so are the office scenes. Something traditional and yet original in its own way.
Haron email
Interesting story; I was following it so eagerly to find out what happened next that I completely forgot there was supposed to be a relevant last line. Nicely done
Ivy Tran email
It had some good parts in it. I especially enjoyed the mournful details in the beginnings and then the playful ending. It was pretty funny, and a decent read! I thoroughly enjoyed most of this story.