Category: First/lastshortlistedspecial
Overheard by a Park Bench
Copyright 2004 by asparkle2 at yahoo dot com. All rights reserved (except for SSC stuff). Overheard by a Park Bench =====by sparkle===== "A boy's best friend is his mother," Darla hugged her toddler. "Until he's five," Sharon joked. Darla sat her son down, patted his head, and smiled when he ran toward the playground. "I don't know whether to look forward to it or not," she murmured. "Although Chad certainly is." Sharon grinned. She and Anthony had their second daughter twelve months after the first one started kindergarten. "It certainly frees up your day," she eventually answered. Darla glanced over, breathed deeply, and commented, "Chad says having me alone Friday night isn't enough. He claims when Mickey starts school, he'll be able to ... take care of me properly. That's how he says it." Sharon's smile brightened; the conspirator leaned closer and murmured, "If Chad is anything like Anthony, the week Mickey starts school, he'll take a week vacation. I could hardly walk by Friday afternoon." Darla's mouth opened slightly, and Sharon added, "And then there were long lunches, surprise drop- bys to be sure I was properly dressed, he said." She turned her head, ostensibly to check on the four-year-olds. "And Chad works from home quite often, doesn't he?" Darla shuddered even as she smiled. "Yes, he does." She knew exactly how he would start his workday too, she thought. Darla would be showered before Daddy took Mickey to school. As soon as they left, she'd be expected to disrobe and wait in position. The position? Chad favored kneeling on the bed, knees wide apart, chest pressed into the bed, hands clasped behind the neck. Naked. It was, he claimed, ideal for submissive contemplation and provided unimpeded access to the pertinent areas of her body: soles, back and inner thighs, tush, anal cleft, vulva, back. Sharon's voice was almost a whisper. "What does he use? A strap?" Darla nodded silently. A long moment passed before she extrapolated. "Before Mickey was born, a paddle every morning 'to put me in the proper frame of mind'. Now, of course, he does it when Mickey stays with you. The strap makes it last longer sometimes for several days." Sharon was quiet. "Anthony used a cane until I conceived. When the kids stay with you, he uses a paddle then the cane. Same reason it lasts longer." She cleared her throat and asked, "And in September? When our babies start school?" Darla blushed. "He says a spanking every morning. I can wear a t-shirt, nothing else." Sharon nodded. "I usually get a thong and apron." She paused. "I guess we won't be seeing much of each other?" Pointing to the two tousled babies running toward them, Darla beamed. "Probably not." Sharon caught Annie in her arms as Mickey climbed onto the bench and cuddled with his mommy. "I'll miss you." Looking up, Darla replied with twinkling eyes, "Oh don't worry Sharon," she teased. "You know we'll both be back here before too long. I predict we'll be knocked up by springtime." Laughing, Sharon hugged her daughter. "I hope so!"
Alex Birch email
Wow is this really what young mums discuss on a bench while feeding the ducks? I'll take more interest next time. I loved this story. I liked the conspiratorial nature of the dialogue under the noses of their little innocents as they debated the wide variety of..er...possibilities in store. Nicely constructed, the dialogue rolled along as if you were in on the conversation, and that's always a plus!! A well written story indeed.
Ivy Tran email
I really liked everything about this story. I used to run around the park that was about a block from prep school, and I always wondered what all the stroller moms on the benches were talking about. I think that the whole situation these two women are in are funny, but in a real life situation, it might be a scary, almost abusive sounding relationship.
Haron email
I do feel for people whose childcare arrangement interfere with their play. This story makes me feel much better for them. School can be such a wonderful thing if one's a parent.