Category: First/last2nd place
Battement Frappe
SSC2004 Story: [First and last] "BATTEMENT FRAPPE" by Alex Birch Words: 502 Category: First and Last 'Madness! Madness!....' the maestro cried '...I cannot permit such a thing!' I was arts critic of 'The Globe' back then and interviewing Maxim Sholokhov, master of the Korchnoi Ballet school, the finest on earth. I'd requested to view one of his secret classes, producing apoplexy. After gentle reminders that my newspaper had sponsored the British tour of his young protegees and had invested heavily in his school, he looked at me steadily and then, to my surprise, gave in. 'You may watch secretly BUT...you must publish nothing until I am dead and mention none of the girls by name! I am an old man with little time left. You will not regret it!' Excited, I agreed and soon was seated in an office adjacent to the classroom where, to my astonishment, I could see the whole length of the room through a two way mirror, used, he said, to check on concentration levels when he left them alone. He left me to begin his tuition, and within minutes the cream of young Russian dancers filed into the next room, beautiful young girls with superb posture, trim young figures and, to my shock, completely naked. My cock hardened as I stared at the fine skin, firm young breasts with button hard nipples, the firm young bottoms and uniformly shaved pussies. The music commenced and the dancers began their exercises on the barre. I gasped as each girl's body stretched out, breasts thrusting forward, legs raised in symmetry, the human form at its most beautiful. The 'arabesque', one leg raised as high as possible, is a delight and, naked, each of these beauties displayed her anus and vulva in a wonderful synchronised choreography. Sholokhov walked down the line nodding and occasionally, where a girl was tiring, he would stop and remove a small martinet from his belt. Without a word he would flick the short strands upwards across the perineum to sting both exposed holes and, to her credit, no cry came from the girl merely a lifting higher of the leg until he stopped whipping and moved on down the line. Occasionally , throughout, he would make notes on each girl's performance until at the end of the class when the girls were dismissed, three remained behind, heads bowed and cheeks flushed. He sat, beckoning each one in turn over his lap and I watched, open mouthed, as three naked bottoms were subjected to an intense spanking. Each girl rose unsteadily at the end her buttocks aflame , her eyes red, but each left the room without crying and with dignity. Now the old man is dead, my manuscript close to completion and tonight I will be introduced, at Covent Garden, to Ludmilla Petrova, the world's finest and most beautiful ballerina. As I kiss her hand and worship at her feet, little will she know I once saw a young girl, naked as the day she was born, receiving a spanking which helped produce the greatest dancer on earth.
Joni email
Alex,
What a delightful picture you paint with this one -- a room full of naked dancers, and the beauty in their form. I liked this very much, so I thank you for sharing it with us. The ending is nicely imaginative.
J*ni
Sarah Nada email
This story is a good example of why it's fun to be a reader for the SSC. :) I'm not a ballet fan, and would not have read "Battement Frappe" if left to my own devices. But once I buckled down and made myself read it, I found it tremendously hot and entertaining...
I definitely recommend it for anyone who likes nontraditional (um, nonbutt) spanking, whether or not they care for dance. Good use of the first line, too.
Sarah
Tami email
After watching the Olympics, I secretly wonder if this story is not a little more fact than fiction. Maybe not so much is the US, but I could see it happening in other countries when honor and prestigious is on the line. This story asks a lot of questions "what if". I love it, a nice balance of humor and originality. Great Job.
tamishy