Category: First/lastshortlisted
Charge-Off
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Charge-Off
by Mija
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Sarah removed her camel Jimmy Choo pumps. They'd been so necessary in
June-- their $500 price now proved obscene. Pausing before removing her
skirt, she looked pleadingly at the camera.
"Please, August will be different. I had extra expenses because of
moving. Please?"
A hesitation. Perhaps he was considering mercy.
"Miss Sarah Angelica Garcia?"
"Yes sir?"
He coughed. Sarah waited, breathless.
"I'm not concerned with your personal life-- only your finances. To
wit, your debts."
Moisture pricked behind Sarah's large brown eyes.
Paper rustled. The voice continued.
"As of July, you owed $5768 to a total of seven creditors, correct?"
She nodded, looking down.
"And, realizing you needed to take hold of your finances, you chose my
firm. Together, Sarah, we worked out a payment plan... which was...?"
Moisture welled into tears-- streaking her white skin. Her voice shook.
"I will pay $500 or 10% of the balance, whichever is greater, to your
firm by the third, every month." She turned away from the camera,
crying.
"Correct. And, this month, I've paid 10% of your balances -- totaling
$576.80."
He continued, "...but how was your check, received on August 7th?"
"$450 sir." Her voice cracked in fear. The penalty was supposed to be
severe.
His voice. "I make that a shortage of $126.80, yes?"
Sarah nodded, unable to speak.
"Thus, Miss Garcia, you have one minute to undress and get into
position. In exactly one minute, Mrs. Koch will enter. Should you
still be clothed and out of position, she will summon two assistants
who will forcibly cut your clothing from your body. Is this entirely
clear?"
Sarah's hands moved of their own volition. She removed her stockings,
skirt and blouse without even thinking about the camera and her unseen
master. But, unhooking her bra, she looked up.
"What position, sir?"
His silence leered at her.
"Bent over the white chair, hands on the seat."
The chair faced the door and away from the camera.
She removed her bra and then, fingers fumbling, took down her panties.
Footsteps outside made her rush into position, her bottom offered to
the silent lens.
A heavyset matron entered holding a 28-inch crook-handled cane and a
clipboard.
The matron clicked her tongue, reading. "That'll be 128 strokes, given
in groups of 24, a quarter hour of rest between groups."
Sarah looked up. But Mrs. Koch spoke to the camera.
The intercom crackled. "Yes, you're on time and a half, dear lady.
Add fourteen tawse strokes for Miss Garcia's late penalty, please."
There was a pause.
"In your own time, madam."
Sarah, surprised, looked at the matron.
"Wait, he *pays* you to cane me?"
The matron flexed the cane impatiently. "Not just you, miss. Bend
over like a good girl."
"But-but, this is costing -- that is, what does he get out of it?"
She tapped the cane in reply. But the intercom broke the silence.
There was low, amplified rumbling laughter.
"Me? I like to watch"
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Category: First/Last
Joni email
Ah Mija....this is just plain mean! And I like it a lot!! It is a very nice twist on the usual "I'll pay your debts, you get spanked", theme. Your writing is always very visual and I especially liked the last transmission from her "benefactor". I could just hear and see him as he laughed. Great job, Mija!
J*ni
Haley Brimley email
A delicious tale, indeed. I'm not sure where to put it... being spanked by a "firm" hired to watch over your expenses is halfway through consensual submission and judicial caning. Doesn't matter much. The feelings of voyeurism are well portrayed, and not just with the finale: the choice of the last line was evident throughout the story, and that only adds to it. Very well done.
Pablo email
It's not an original idea, but this one is given a very effective and compelling shape. I particularly like that the Big Bad Man remains just a voice, like some sort of spanko Blofeld. An extra twist - in the manner of True Lies - would be given if she knew him. The relationship between the two of them - it might be business, but it's clearly not *just* business - is the most intriguing thing here. The mysterious Mrs. Koch is also worthy of some extra time. What's her story? Love the visuals, too. This one would make a great little spanko short film. (Pablo)