Category: First/last
A Promise
This story contains the spanking of a child. If that will upset you, please skip it. A Promise ** "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn," I answered Mom when she asked if I would mind a boy babysitter. "Why couldn't you get Sharon?" "She's busy and I don't have many options since you tear through babysitters like a mower through grass. You will do fine with Clyde." I wanted to check him out before mom left and waited for him by the door. As soon as I heard the first knock, I whipped the door open and he was knocking on air. "You must be Gail," he said, "I'm Clyde." He offered his hand for a shake. "I guessed," I answered and shook his hand, squeezing it as hard as I possibly could. "I hear you can be a handful," he said. "Worried?" I asked. Mom came up and ran through the usual spiel. She told him to use whatever methods he thought best to make me behave. She just said that to scare me but it didn't work. As soon as she left I said, "I'm hungry!" We went into the kitchen, which is where most household accidents happen. One did. I accidentally microwaved a sealed bag of marshmallows. The inside of the microwave resembled the last scene from Ghostbusters. Clyde hustled me over to a kitchen chair and forced me to sit on his lap. "When was the last time you were spanked?" "Never. Spanking is abuse. If you spank me, I call 911," I informed him. "You do need a spanking and on your bare bottom too." "PERVERT!" I yelled. "With this," he grabbed a wooden spoon from the counter. He managed to get me over his knee and get my pants down but he paid in blood from my scratching and biting. His first smack didn't really hurt much but by the sixth or seventh my bottom was stinging as if it had a sunburn. I kicked and yelled cuss words, but my bottom was getting scorching hot. I started crying and begged him to stop. "Are you telling me that you are ready to behave like a young lady now?" he asked and gave me another smack. "Yes!" "When I'm finished warming your bottom, *smack* you are going to stand in the corner. *smack* If I have any more problems with you *smack* we do this again. *smack* Understood?" *smack* I was crying so hard then that all I could do was nod. He put me down, pulled my pants up and gave me a shove toward the corner. When he finished cleaning the oven, he led me to the couch and put his arm around me. "That wasn't fun for me either, Gail. I prefer enjoying your company to tanning your backside. If you don't know that you can be a good girl for the rest of the day, you should spend more time in the corner. If you can promise me that you will behave, I'll give you a hug and we'll watch some TV together." I gave him a hug and he took it, so that was a promise.
Polara email
This well-written story covers the familiar ground of a spanking that adjusts a bratty attitude. Babysitter Clyde takes the firm-but-friendly approach. The first line seems somewhat out of character, even for smart-mouthed Gail, so I have to say I think the story would have been better off in the child category, and without the first line. Very nice ending.
Pablo email
The smart-alec tone feels very right here - though it leaves me, perhaps deliberately, unsure of the ages of the characters. The plot itself is a relatively simple one of taming. It works nicely, though perhaps feels a little too easy. There's clearly a great deal to be won over here, yet the winning is all too straightforward. I'd have enjoyed a little more struggle, and therefore a little more catharsis. A good deal is left unanswered. Has the mother introduced Clyde for exactly this reason? What would she think of the events if she knew? Will she find out? It feels like there ought to be more to the kid's psychology than is suggested by the fact that she's straightened out by one spanking, and that has to do with the relationship with the mother. Fun and satisfying, then, but with scope for a lot more depth. (Pablo)
Trisha Allen email
Great story! Truly enjoyable, well written and described. I love great babysitter stories that change a child's attitude in a hurry. Keep up the great writing!