Category: First/last
Honeybuns
SSC '04 "Honeybuns" [first/last] By Rhosymedre 500 words ________________________________ NC-17; to be read by legal adults only please. ________________________________ Honeybuns I like to watch. No. I live to watch. Her. Climaxing like no tomorrow. I love returning home late, to our bed. To her naked, sleeping body. I peel away blankets and roll her on her back. She typically remains unconscious, even as I tempt fate by rearranging limbs here, orifices there, before the main onslaught. Then I begin stroking her nipples, and she slumbers no more. I tease them into tiny, turgid fists. I ride them onto a razor's edge of ache. My fingers work her peaks with the honed patience of a sensual torturer. My lips join in, curling hotly around the rigid, raw pap. I suck and teethe the helpless nubs. I've bound her hands to her thighs with soft Japanese rope so they can't interfere. Her mouth can't beg through the unique gag keeping her comfortable and open; she emits guttural animal sounds but words are beyond her. I know my attentions to her nipples feed directly to her womb, her vagina, her clitoris. Briefly I permit her to gyrate her pelvis and clench her buns as the ache sharpens...to heighten the invasion of the slender probe already up her ass. I don't touch her soaked cunt yet. Soon I'll shoehorn two fingers between her lightly furred nether lips and snugly scissor her erect and straining clit, squeezing rhythmically. I'll whisper to her to pull her abdominal muscles tight and to mentally scoot the burning clit itch eating at her up her love channel into her uterus... to explode it in a fit of passion! Not yet though. I turn my Honeybuns on her tummy, one hand spread under her, massaging her belly above her pubic mound. Soothing -- for now. She almost pathologically chafes her still intensely sensitized breasts against the now sweaty sheets. My other hand splays on her buttocks, mere centimeters from her bound wrists and rectal probe. She always tenses, knowing I don't soothe back there. When she can talk she tells me my spankings remind her of varnish remover blitzing a piece of furniture; she always worries my hand will strip off epidermal layers. I don't deny I crack into her cheeks almost savagely. She flames as I do. Outside and in. My massaging hand lowers from her abdomen to her thatch and below, dipping in the geyser about to gush, two questing fingers clamping around her clit. My other hand stops smacking and invades too, lodging two, then three fingers in her sopping vagina. Holding her so intimately, so vulnerably, so uncompromisingly forces her to come apart equally intimately, vulnerably, uncompromisingly. She soars, and I revel in the watching. When she floats down, I'll untie her, de-muzzle her, and tangle with her in our mussed bed. Then she'll take her turn driving *me* to the chasm and shoving me over. She possesses unsurpassed charms and skills as a lover, and she regales turning them on me full power after I've ravished her. Bring it on, Honeybuns! I'm yours, all yours.
Haley Brimley email
While I must admit it is very exciting, I'm not sure that spanking is the *focus* of this story. The feeling is that it's like a last-minute addition to make it fit into an SSC category. On the other hand, possession and submission are key themes, that the "savage" smacking does reinforce to a degree. The focus is and remains extreme sex, though. With good hints of SM. Nice writing.
Eric
Reading 'Honeybuns' is like watching the road through the rear window of a moving car. The car stops at the last word, but the image of the road keeps moving. The story has developed its own sensuous momentum, seemingly without effort. A most enjoyable ride.
Ivy Tran email
An average story. I don't like these types of BDSM stories, although the quality of writing is wonderful. Good use of words and descriptions, I am sure that honeybuns can be enjoyed by many, good work. I like the many details of every little step, but the ending is too abrupt for me. It needs some closure.