Category: First/last1st place
The Devil in the Camisole
SSC '04 [first/last], 500 words *********** NC-17; only legal adult readers, please. *********** The Devil in the Camisole by Rhosymedre My timing is impeccable. Mandy's a heart-pumping eyeful. Quite unawares since her back is to me and she doesn't sense my presence when I push wide the barely ajar bedroom door. Her tan, athletic legs and delicious alabaster ass (no nude sun bathing around these parts) unwittingly allure as she leans forward to pluck up laid-out clothes from our queen-size bed. I never rebuff my lady's invitations, intentional or not, so I take four long (hushed) strides and wrap my arms low around Mandy's hips. Before she can huff indignantly at me for sneaking up on her, I nuzzle her ear and growl, "You're wearing my favorite outfit, woman." And she is: semi-nakedness. Her lower half is, as I've exulted, bare, but as is her habit, she's already donned her camisole. She owns assorted (all gifts from me) but this one is my favorite. Royal blue, it cuddles her breasts, then falls loosely down her rib cage where I can easily maraud. Which I do now. She squirms in my arms. "Not now, Graham. You need to change. We're expected at eight." But Mandy doesn't always say what she means. Besides, she knows darn well that camisole is tinder to my match, so to speak. I kiss her earlobe, peeking down her front. Just as I knew: nipples puckered ferociously taut. I'm sure she is leaking nicely between her legs too. But those needy places have to wait for my touch. I slide my hands back of her and clutch a bottom cheek in each, as if I'm testing two casaba melons for ripeness. Pinned between me and the bed, Mandy can only sway in place. She moans breathily, sexily. I lovingly knead her generous globes. Her scent fills the air and I'm terribly hard. I push her over the raised bed and sprawl her thighs. I shakily free my penis from my trousers. I'm about to thrust in when she sighs, "Do it, Terry, take me, I'm yours." My name is Graham Gary Gogh. No "T"s there, no "Terry"s. I freeze momentarily. Mindless jealousy and pricks of fury rush my brain in pure reflex, and instead of pumping into her, my hand flashes against her ass. I wallop, slamming deep into her musculature. Not just her ass; I broil her thighs too, wherever I can reach. She doesn't move a muscle, and no cries escape; she just lets me punish her. I cease only when both my hands are numb. I plunge into her, seizing her hip bones. She comes around me instantaneously, wildly milking my cock and flinging me over the precipice. I lie heavily on her, galvanized by her slip, her confessed betrayal: Terry. Mandy stirs after several minutes and slyly whispers, "Graham, that was our best game yet. Come on, I need another shower -- with you." Stupefied, I let her up, and allow her to tug me into the bathroom. God, that camisole puts the devil into my wife...and me. I mutter fecklessly, "Madness, madness."
Alex Birch email
This story is beautifully written and the writer has the magic art of conjuring up a very hot situation which involves the reader from beginning to end. The whole scene has an intensity and credibility which grips and is a tribute to the writer's skill. Very nice indeed!
Haley Brimley email
While the spanking isn't exactly the point of this story, it's just too darn humourous. Hehe. One pretty much understands that it's a "game" from the very beginning, but that doesn't take away the fun. A little too much focus is put on the sexy/seductive parts, and too little attention on the actual spanking. But overall, it is a pleasant reading. Objectively, I'd hardly call it "a spanking story" -- but personally, I enjoyed it quite much.
Hal email
Whow, the word pictures in this story was vivid. I enjoyed reading this story. I enjoyed the flow to this story. I wonder if they ever made it to their appointment at eight. I don't think it really matters. I certainly hope that this writer continues to write this type of story for us. I look forward to seeing what they can do with a unlimited number of words. Would they lose the edge that this SSC entry has? I hope not.
SirHal