Category: Mini-saga
Night Shift
Sitting in the canteen, draining my coffee, I imagine you: red-bottomed, naked, trembling beneath my desk, wondering whether approaching footsteps herald further punishment or the shame of discovery. Nodding to the guard, who'll linger in the office overlooking ours, I pick up the bag containing your clothes and head back.
Angie email
As a general rule, I'm not a huge fan of mini-saga. It usually takes more than a few sentences to get my interest. But, this one was rather powerful. The speaker was that kind of sadistic that makes me all squirmy and I liked the element of implied, perhaps accidental, voyeurism with the guard.
Tami email
Sometimes 50 words just isn't enough. Good bases for a more detailed storyline. All in all a worthwhile effort.
Tami
Janet Miles email
Brrr! Well-done. Good setup, nice suspense.