Category: Mini-saga
Undercover Motivations
UNDERCOVER MOTIVATIONS (MIN-SAGA) (M/F) "This undercover assignment is over" the gruff Lieutenant said. "The principal sent me another permission slip". "Now he wants to spank you bare". "Totally bare?" the policewoman gasped. "Panties down?" "Bare NAKED?" "Yup!" "Sign it!" she said, her trembling with excitement. "I've been naughty - I mean...I'm sure I'll find evidence...eventually".
Sarah Nada email
"Undercover Motivations" is a charming tease of a story. The author makes the most of the 50 word limit, and I especially like the last line.
Sarah
Pablo email
From the cartoon-strip genre of mini-saga writing, in which the final panel is the punch-line. Nothing terribly new in the idea of an undercover situation becoming more complex, but there's definitely something very appealing about the idea of a policewoman masquerading as a schoolgirl. The idea of both her and the principal getting their jollies from the school paddling, but without entirely realising it, has a satisfying symmetry. (Pablo)
Haley Brimley email
Hehe very nice. I didn't expect the ending. Makes for cool visual imagery.