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Category: Mini-saga

At the Westmore Residence

Rhosymedre 

At the Westmore Residence
by Rhosymedre

I'm the designated fly on the wall at the Westmores'.
What a gas.
The best days?
When inbred gentility syphons out like hourglass sand,
another symbiosis infiltrating.
When schoolmarmish zealotry cracks home the blackboard pointer,
feeding his mounting hysteria
with inescapable, sizzling weals blooming red rose
across frantic, agonized ass.

Eric

This reviewer certainly enjoyed the imagery in 'At the Westmore Residence'. The best part of reading contributions like this is being able to savour every colour, every sound, every object, without the pressure of following a storyline that must move at a certain pace.

Tami

Very descriptive. I'm not sure it tells the whole story, it leaves a lot of unanswered questions. But that is the point of this category. I would like to see a longer version of this story.

tamishy

Haley Brimley

Interesting, well written. Hard to catch on at first, but it's actually well thought out and the description is pretty good for a 50-word story. Pleasant read.