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Category: Mini-saga

In the Brain of a Brat

Saw Much

"Look at me!"

Why?  I know what you look like

"You're in trouble"

So what else is new?

"Are you listening to me?"

Like I have a choice.

"Wipe that look off your face."

You'd like me to smile?

"Would a spanking change your attitude?"

Crap.  There's no right answer.

Hal

A lot packed in so little. An interesting read. Thought provoking to say the least. I enjoyed reading this more then one time. Yes, but answer they must. That is always an interesting time both in fiction and in real life. I look forward to reading more stories by this writer.

SirHal

Tami

So cute, I love it. There is no right answer when the only question is how much the mysterious guardian wants to spank. So simple and short it's just so damn sweet. Nice Job.

tamishy

Polara

Loved this one. I like the way the dom (?) is speaking and the brat is thinking the answers. As in: You can order me to keep quiet but I'll think whatever I want to, so there! The progression is subtle, but the spanking is clearly on the way.