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Category: Mini-saga

Dear Diary

Saw Much 

Dear Diary,

As you know, I've been down in the dumps lately.

I went to the Happy Jalapeño to drown my sorrows in tex-mex and
margaritas.

I ate everything in sight;
drank too much;
met a hunk;
danced with him;
got spanked;
got laid;
feel much better now.

Love,

Linda

Chantymer

Good concept, intimate entry in a diary. Had all the necessary elements, a spanking, a hunk, and a satisfied lady at the end.

John Benson

The 50 word story is a very difficult form. At its best it's concentrated language, almost like a poem. This lacked the necessary zing.

--johnb

Angie

This one cracked me up! If only it were that easy to find spanking partners - we'd all be feeling much better, I'm sure. A lot said in a few words -- good job.