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Category: Mini-saga

Responsibilities

William Johnson

SSC   Responsibilities   Mini Saga

'I said, do the dishes properly or I spank you.'

My wife spanked me.

She re-washed up.

'Beds' not made properly!'

Spanked again. She re-made the bed.

'Ironing isn't done properly'

Another spanking. She re-did the ironing.

'OK. Agreed. You do the housework, and just spank me
whenever you want!'

Haley Brimley

A rather ordinary story that turns brilliant with the last verse, making it sound almost like a joke you'd tell at a bar. Direct, to-the-point, and doesn't waste any of its 50-something words. An enjoyable read.

Haron

What a brat! Hopefully the wife will soon get an idea about household chores being the most effective punishment of all...

Ivy Tran

Story was short and sweet. Not bad but not great. Short story means less to comment on, I'm very sorry! It was alright.