Category: Mini-saga
The Wedding
This is my first try at this... be gentle (or not ;) ) The Wedding "Do you promise to love, honor and obey?" "Obey?" she gasped "Indeed. Under penalty of spanking" Blushing, the bride whispers, "I do" Her groom wears a slightly evil grin. "And do you promise to love, honor and spank her often?" "I do" "I now pronounce you man and wife, you may spank the bride"
Alex Birch email
This is a wryly amusing twist on the marriage vows which raises a mild twitch of the lips without setting any fires alight but it is very difficult to do that in this restricted format. Nice attempt
Haley Brimley email
Haha, lovely variation on a classic theme... with the ** "Obey?" she gasped ** line an absolute beauty. One can really picture it happening, and it's grotesque. Where do they train these ministers anyway? Heh.
Ivy Tran email
A good story. It was short and sweet although this would never happen in a real wedding, unless all your friends were just like the wedding party, otherwise it would be quite funny! I think that if I were at this wedding, I would have burst out laughing, as if it were a joke!! Very funny!!!