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Audrey's Dance

HalfHisAge

Audrey's Dance
by Tasha


     "Daddy, I did go in there to check out that ridiculous
smorgasbord. And while I was in there I happened to mention that I was
sad."
     "About what?"
     Audrey sighed. "About my dear, close friend Laura being brutally
murdered."
     Ben Horne shook with rage. "Do you realize the kind of money your
little performance just cost this family?" He grabbed his daughter and
shook her. "If you ever pull another stunt like that you'll be
scrubbing bidets in a Bulgarian convent!"
     Audrey rolled her eyes. "Oh, Daddy, I'm so afraid!"
     Ben glared at her. Losing the Norwegian contract was devastating,
but Audrey's deliberate sabotage was more than he could handle. She'd
been a spoiled brat all her life and it was his own fault. It was too
late for Laura, but it might not be too late for Audrey. He grabbed her
by the arm.
     "Hey! What are you-"
     "I will not let you ruin this family, young lady," he said between
clenched teeth. "And you're going to pay for what you did today. No one
has ever made you answer for your behavior before, but that's going to
change."
     He dragged her to the bed, sat down and pulled her across his lap.
     "Daddy!" Audrey kicked and struggled in fury. "Are you crazy? Let
me go!"
     Ben laughed. "Oh no, I'm not letting you go until I see tears of
contrition. Until I know you're sorry and you promise never to do
anything like this again."
     "Don't hold your breath!" she hissed.
     Ignoring her, Ben flipped up her skirt. Yes, he should have done
this years ago. He yanked her panties down, baring her bottom. Then he
began to spank her. Hard.
     Audrey yelped and cursed him, but he ignored her.
     "Now you're going to pay for all the childish antics you've gotten
away with over the years."
     Over and over he smacked her bottom, hard, eliciting shrieks and
howls from her. Audrey kicked her feet, drumming her saddle oxfords on
the floor.
     Ben held her down, watching her bottom dance, reddening, under his
palm. He wasn't going to stop until his daughter had learned her
lesson.
     He saw that he'd left the door open, but he didn't care. The
guests ought to be comforted by the fact that he knew how to handle his
own daughter. And if it embarrassed Audrey, so much the better. She'd
had this coming for years.

                                     oOo

     Agent Cooper cocked his head at the sounds. He listened intently
for a few moments and then broke into a huge, childlike grin. He took
out his recorder.
     "Diane," he said in a low voice. "I'm standing outside the bedroom
of Audrey Horne, inside the Great Northern. And I can't believe what
I'm hearing! It sounds like..."
     He paused to listen again, holding his recorder up to catch the
smacking sounds. "Yes. It is. It's a spanking!" His face was a mask of
glee as he listened to the tireless hand of Ben Horne and imagined
Audrey's dance.



© 2004 SSC by Tasha

Ivy Tran

It seems to me, to be a well thought out, yet short and sweet beginning to a journey of a father and daughter. I can't be too sure having never seen the movie, and I'm assuming this is a make believe expert for a movie. I thought the reporter at the end was a great twist to the entire scene!

Haron

I couldn't stop grinning from the moment I realised where this scene was missing from. The stylisation is lovely - I wish the scene was actually in the film like this. The ending is particularly tasty.

Chantymer

This is an interesting story. A young lady finally getting her comeuppance at the hand of her father. Good storyline which flows. You can picture the scene in your mind.