Category: Missing scene
Chapter 13 Revisited
SSC2004 Short Story 'CHAPTER 13 REVISITED' by Alex Birch Category: Missing Scene Words: 499 "Go into the library,leave the door open,and play the piano" I was somewhat discomfited by his bluntness but I departed , obeying his directions. I sat down at the piano and began to play a piece by Mozart but my nervous state was such that my hands trembled and blundered across the keyboard. Within seconds I heard his firm tread and the door thrown wide open, his angry voice biting into my very soul. "I thought you could play! It seems you have deceived me. You play like a schoolgirl" Ashamed, I attempted to excuse myself and my nervous state but he would have none of it. "Stand up!!'. His gruff voice brooked no argument and I hastened to obey. "Take off your drawers!" My head swam and I tell you, dear reader, I was near to fainting such was my shock at his crudeness. I tried as best I could, given our respective stations, to resist his demand. Even Mr Brocklehurst at his harshest had never issued such a decree. 'You will obey me!...' the voice was quiet but full of menace '...for 'tis concentration you seem to lack and I will instil that into you" With tears rolling down my face, I raised my skirts and fumbled beneath. Eventually my clumsy fingers found the ties of my drawers and, mortified, I let them fall in a pool about my legs. "Excellent. Now raise your skirts well above your hips behind!" Adele was still in the room, her eyes wide with astonishment,and I protested indignantly at her presence but he dismissed my objections bluntly. "Adele must learn the cost of carelessness and you are her tutor are you not...' he snapped '...now be prompt!" My face was hot with shame yet some feeling I could not define gripped me as I turned away modestly and raised my skirts above my waist, exposing my bare person to them both. "Now sit down as far back on the stool as you can so that ample portions of bare flesh are available to me, then resume the piece!!" Close to fainting I did as he instructed realising, dear reader, what an immodest tableau I presented to my ward and her father. I heard him take a few steps to the desk in the corner then the opening of a drawer. I began to play once more , praying that the demons which had so bedevilled my first attempt were gone, but my nerves were now frayed beyond endurance. Once more my trembling fingers played sharps where none were written and the more I tried the worse I became. A sharp intake of breath behind me and a gasp from Adele was followed by a sibilant rush and a sharp impact on my well presented buttocks. My hindquarters were instantly aflame and I cried out in pain. "Adele will hear Mozart tonight as he should be played..." he said grimly "...however long it takes and whatever the cost"
Hal email
I have to be honest. I have no idea where this fits in. I don't even know if this is a movie or a book. With that said, I will rate and review this story as wrote. I don't think if I knew exactly what the original work was, it would make a difference. The writer painted good and clear word pictures. The story had a beginning, middle and end. It had a flow to it. It was complete in and of it's self. It was interesting to read. I do wonder how long it took for her to play Mozart properly. The writer of this story does have a interesting style. I hope to read more of their work.
SirHal
Haley Brimley email
Interesting piece, I had never really thought about a spanking in "Jane Eyre"... makes perfect sense. The feel of the period is nicely recaptured, and nice are some of the ideas throughout. An enjoyable reading.
Angie email
Hot, Hot, Hot! I absolutely love Jane Eyre, and this was a scene I never even realized was missing. :-) Beautifully done -- it's been awhile since I read it, but I'm going to give you props for staying true to the voice anyway. Very lovely, squirmy story.