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The Book
SSC category: missing scene The Book by Tasha (This isn't really a missing scene, but a missing episode. Remember that silly old storyline on the original Star Trek where they'd come across a planet who'd based their entire civilisation on some period in Earth's history? They had 1920s Chicago gangs, Romans and Nazis. So this is the story they failed to do, about a civilisation based on a book left behind by some other careless visitor.) "This way!" Kirk commanded, running in the direction of the woman's screams. Spock followed. They reached the town square, where a woman was tied to a post in the center of a jeering crowd. Her dress was torn open at the back and a man stood behind her with a whip. Kirk made to intercede, but Spock held him back. "Captain, may I remind you of the Prime Directive, which prohibits our interference." It was not a question and Kirk had no argument. They watched as the woman was flogged and then released. "You're not from here," a voice said. They turned to see a teenage boy. He wore a white shirt with a tie, a blazer and short trousers. "We're not," Spock confirmed. "Can you tell us who your leader is?" The boy looked around as though about to impart a great secret. But before he could speak he was interrupted. "Johnson!" The boy jumped at the voice. "Yes, sir!" A man dressed in a long black cape was striding purposefully towards him, waving what looked like a thin walking cane. "Get back to class right now or it's another six of the best for you!" "Yes, sir!" the boy said, hurrying on his way. "Six of the best," Spock mused. "Fascinating." There was a large mansion at the edge of the town square. A huge bay window in the front allowed an unobstructed view inside. They edged their way towards it, towards the unmistakable sound of another girl's cries. Through the window they saw a young girl bending over the back of a chair, her skirts raised, her drawers unlaced. Her bare bottom was red and criss-crossed with welts. A young woman stood behind the girl, whipping her mercilessly with a bundle of switches. At each stroke the girl yelped and counted. "Seven. Thank you, Miss Henshaw. Oww! Eight. Thank you, Miss Henshaw." Kirk's usual maverick nature was somewhat abated by the sight of the attractive female tormentor. When the ritual was over the girl took the birch rod from the governess. She kissed it and placed it gently in a cupboard. Then she curtseyed and left the room. Kirk was already at the front door. "Yes? May I help you?" the woman asked. "We're new in town," Kirk explained with a flirtatious smile. "We were wondering who's in charge." The governess blinked at them. "Why, I am," she said. "You?" he choked. Her eyes narrowed at Kirk. "Yes, ME. According to The Book." "What Book is that?" Kirk asked. She gestured grandly to a thick book resting on a lectern. Spock opened it to the title page and read: "The English Vice. By Ian Gibson." Kirk's eyes widened. "Spock! Do you think Captain Swinburne is responsible for all this strange behavior?" "Quite possibly, Captain." Kirk turned back to ask the young woman, surprised to see that she had retrieved the birch rod from the cupboard. "And now we will address your insolence," she said. "Captain." © 2004 SSC by Tasha
Chantymer email
This is well written and falls into step with the Star Trek stories. Very imaginative and well thought out. Would like to read more about this particular adventure involving the Star Trek crew.
Alex Birch email
Oh I like this very much. The writer has a deft touch with style and mannerism and, reading Spock's lines, I can see the arched eyebrows and superior stare. The idea of a society based on 'The English Vice' rather brings tears to the eyes ( do they apply healing balm as punishment, I wonder?) but the writer handles it all with a confident writing style and a twinkly sense of humour which is really delighful.
Haley Brimley email
Oh my, didn't I always wish for an episode like this. Hehe. Jokes aside, it would have worked good that it was a "missing scene" or not. It largely reminds me of Kent's "A Visit to Paddletown" and The Flogmaster's "How I Won My Pullitzer" -- but the winner idea of this story is having a society run by a Book that was not meant to be an inspiration. I don't know if the authors knows or not, but it's one of the leading themes in old-times science fiction. Two spankings are portrayed and one is alluded to, and all three quite well done; it is a good accomplishment in just 500 words. Satisfactory work.