Category: Not-my-kinkshortlisted
Breathless
Breathless
by Tasha
Val struggled in his arms, but the man pinned her down easily.
'You little slut,' he growled. 'Now you won't go to the police.'
He wrapped his hands around her throat. His fingers touched at the
base of her hairline. Then he began to squeeze.
Val gasped and then her air was cut off. Instinctively she grabbed
his wrists, trying to prise his hands away. It was no use.
'I told you not to fight me, didn't I? All I wanted to do was warm
your little arse, teach you a lesson about dressing like a slut. But
you had to resist, didn't you? You had to scream. Well, this ought to
shut you up.'
She tried to protest, tried to form words, but there was nothing
she could do. He was much stronger than she was.
'Bloody cockteaser,' he continued, squeezing harder. 'You think
you can just strut around in a slinky dress and pretend you're not
offering yourself to all the men in the bar?'
Val kicked and twisted feebly in his grasp, her strength beginning
to wane as the blood pounded in her head.
'I always wanted to put you over my knee and give you what you
deserve. But you had to be difficult. You just couldn't take your
medicine. Now you're going to pay even more.'
He was still speaking, but his words were nothing but a hum in her
ears. Black spots appeared behind her eyes and then the slow, pulsing
darkness engulfed her.
oOo
Val swam back to consciousness and euphoria to find Tom smiling
down at her.
She sighed and touched her throat.
'I'd better put some Arnica on that,' he said with a laugh. 'Or
you're not going out in public without a turtleneck.'
She grimaced. 'But it's June! I'll suffocate!'
Tom grinned. 'Not your kink, eh?'
© 2004 SSC by Tasha
Joni email
Tasha,
Not My Kink, either...I'm way too fond of consciousness and breathing...
However, you did an astounding job of setting this up and following through, with the play aspect only coming at the end. A doff of my writer's cap to you...this was very well done.
J*ni
Tami email
Talk about edgy, The writer tries to input a little bit of humor, but it's almost too little too late. Don't get me wrong it's a great story, it just scares me a little. Since this is not really my kink, I applaud the writer for pushing the envelope.
Tami
Sarah Nada email
Though this story is entered in the Not My Kink category, I also found it very edgy. Indeed, it's one of the only SSC stories I've ever thought about sending back on the grounds that I couldn't evaluate it fairly. But even though it pushed my buttons in a truly unpleasant way, I recognize that it's well written, and the author makes a valiant attempt to treat kinks she doesn't share in ways that might be hot to people who do... So, bravo.
Sarah