SSC (Picture - old Kansas schoolhouse) The Schoolhouse by Tasha It used to be a schoolhouse. But now the boards are rotting and the windows are broken. The walls and blackboard are covered with mould. Spiders lurk in every corner. Water drips on me from the gaping hole in the roof and I flinch. He tells me to be still. His footsteps make the boards groan as he circles me. From the corner of my eye I see him winding the long strap around his hand, tightening it. The leather creaks as though in anticipation. I keep my eyes on the wall in front of me. It will be worse if I look away. 'Take off your clothes.' I do as I am told. Slowly. The way he likes. I fold each item of clothing and place it neatly on the chair beside me. I don't try to cover myself; I know better than that. I keep my knickers on. He likes to take them down himself. 'Bend over and touch your toes.' Trembling, I lean forward, stretching towards the floor. I press my fingertips against my toes and close my eyes. A fat droplet of water splashes onto my naked back and I make a sound he doesn't like. Instantly, the strap flashes against my legs, making me cry out and sway. I manage to stay in position, wincing at the pain as I focus on remaining still for my punishment. It will be doubled if I move. 'Do you know why you're here?' 'Yes, sir. I'm here to be disciplined for not performing my duties properly.' These are the words he taught me the first time he brought me here and it's what I say every time. Tonight it's because I spilled wine on the tablecloth. The schoolhouse is a mile down the road from the house, far enough away that no one will hear my cries. It's a terrible walk, even in lovely weather. He makes me walk several yards ahead of him so he can watch me as he follows. He gives the strap another tug and I hear it creak. 'Careless maids deserve to be punished, don't they?' I swallow, then force the words out. 'Yes, sir.' 'Let's see if a sound whipping will teach you to be more attentive in future.' He slips his fingers into the waistband of my knickers, tugging them down to my knees. Slowly. I start to cry as he bares my bottom. It's chilly outside and the wind penetrates the decaying building easily. I feel so much more exposed in the cold. 'How many strokes do you deserve?' I don't hesitate; he broke me of that long ago. 'Fifty, sir.' There is a gentle tinkling sound as the wind loosens a shard of glass hanging in a window pane. It falls and breaks softly on the rotting floor. The leather creaks again and I brace myself. © 2004 SSC by Tasha
Trisha Allen email
Great story! Well written! It left me wondering though is she his maid or is she his wife treated like a maid? I'm not sure, but I enjoyed the story anyway. I loved her apprehension. So clearly wrote that you could easily picture this in mind. The author described the apprehension, the trembling, the dread, the knowing and finally the actually spanking in part. Please keep up the good work and keep the stories pouring in. Trisha Allen
Pablo email
As a story in the 'Picture' category, it's entirely appropriate that the location itself should be described with careful and vivid detail. I find the contrast between the detail of the scene and the relative shallowness of the characters to be striking, though. I'd much rather that small details of character illuminate the story. What's here is a competent but somewhat bland depiction of a D/s relationship, with nothing that makes the characters feel real. (Pablo)
Chantymer email
Very descriptive. I could picture in my mind exactly how the schoolhouse had deteriorated over the years. The punishment was described very succintly. It made the reader feel sorry for the girl getting the strapping.