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The Clock

Category: Picture

Punctuality Counts

Y. Lee Coyote

SSC-2004-04[PICTURE]: Punctuality Counts  (M/M, cane) 

My fourth SSC-2004 entry was inspired by the one of the pictures -- the
clock.  It contains a scene of a caning.  If such a subject is
offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please
leave now.

This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited
without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if
complete including the copyright notice.

The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including
constructive criticism, and suggestions.  

E-mail: YLeeCoyote at mail dot com


Punctuality Counts
By
Y. Lee Coyote

The message light was flashing when I entered my pad.  Master's order
was simple: "BE AT THE HAWK BY 1:00."  I had adequate time to shower and
dress and get there on time.  I left my pad at 12:44 exactly for the
twelve minute walk.

I walked into the bar at 12:56 exactly.  Master turned to look at me,
picked up the cane and  pointed to the clock with it.  He smiled.  The
clock showed 01:07:29!

I knew what he expected.  I dropped my jeans and bent over the pool
table.  I also knew the penalty -- one cut per minute.  The cane cut the
air and then my bare butt eight times.  I wanted to yell but that would
have embarrassed Master so I gritted my teeth extra tight.

It was all over except for the pain when I realized that the bar clock
was, like all bar clocks, ten minutes fast  I had forgotten that and
paid dearly.

The End

© Copyright A.I.L.  June 14, 2004

Y.

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John Benson

Oh my.

It's so hard sometimes to find an excuse to punish a submissive who's trying so very hard to be good. And then to be tricked by... bar time. Nasty, that. (snicker) Nice touch.

--johnb

Polara

I liked this on first read. I like it even more now that I've read it a couple of more times. There's a lot of good stuff in this tightly-worded package. The narrator has a very clear, consistent voice. As far as I can see on re-reading, you leave to our imagination whether it is a he or a she. And yet I was so convinced the narrator was a young man that I had to go back and check twice. Something about the terseness, I guess.

Haron

The protagonist pays dearly for a mistake - no matter what the mistake actually is, I bet he or she will be particularly paranoid about checking clocks in the future. Nice little vignette.