THE OTHER SIDE OF THE DOOR (F/F, PHOTO, BASED ON THE WHITE DOOR, THE PICTURE OF THE WHITE DOOR AT THE END OF THE TEMPTY HALLWAY). 72 hours of observation in an approved psychiatric facility was the standard procedure in such cases. But nothing about this case was standard. Everyone knew that the vengeful former mental patient had put the LSD's in Doctor Rachel Lynn's coffee. And the police were happy to wait 48 hours for the lab results. But Rachel was the head of the state licensing board, and she insisted that the rules applied to everyone. Rachel demanded 72 hours of observation. Rachel selected the Woman's wing of Oak Psychiatric hospital. Rachel sat on the bench and stared down the long white empty hallway. The wooden bench that she was unyielding, and Rachel found herself squirming in her restraints. The door at the end of the hallway marked the entrance to the "Reception Area". Reception, indeed! The last time Rachel had walked down this hallway she had been in charge and in control. Her critique of the facility had been merciless. Doctor Lynn had been particularly incensed by their punishment of "disrespectful" patients. Oak Psychiatric Hospital was a politically connected institution and Rachel's protests were quickly swept under the rug. Oak remained the perfect place to dispose of an unwanted wife or a difficult mistress...for a price. At last the gleaming white door opened. Rachel felt a sinking feeling in the pit of her stomach as the craggily nurse marched towards her. "It's nice to see you again, Rachel", the nurse cooed, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "I see they have you all nice and snug" she teased. Rachel bit her lip in nervous anticipation as she stared up at the woman who for the next 72 hours would rule her life. "Not so sassy now are you?" the nurse taunted. "That's good". "You know what I handle sass, don't you?" "I'll paddle your cute little fanny until they dance around the room". "That's a pretty wool blazer, dear", the nurse said as she appraisingly ran Rachel's lapel between her thumb and forefinger. "Of course I'm going to have to take away your fancy clothes, and clip your nails, dear you". "I'll have to shower you, and delouse you, and cut your hair, and examine that dirty little snatch of yours for contraband". "I'm sure all of the fellas are going to love seeing the great Doctor Lynn prancing around in the shortly little hospital gown I picked out for you". "You'll be cute as a button!" "Now you just wait here dear", the nurse said condescendingly. "I have to go find my rubber gloves for your examination...and the paddle!" Rachel watched the laughing nurse stride down the sterile white corridor and recede back into her lair. Rachel's heart raced. Her palms were sweaty and her face was flush. And the hot wet stickiness between her legs was driving her crazy! On this side of the door she was a doctor: strong, independent, and answerable to no one. But on the other side of the door the paddle was waiting.
John Benson email
I had to read this twice. I'm slow. At first it seemed somewhat dark, but the second time through It clicked. She'd chosen the place where she'd be punished and humiliated. Nice. Very nice.
--johnb
Hal email
I enjoyed watching the physiology drama unfold in this story. I think the writer made a typo in this sentence: "You know what I handle sass, don't you?", I got hung up on this sentence and it stopped the flow of the story. I really enjoyed the word pictures that this writer painted for us. Yes, there was no doubt that the picture fitted with this story. I thought that the writer was very clever with working this story and the picture into a single picture. There was not one single swat in this story but it had all of the necessary elements necessary for a good "spanking" story. I look forward to reading more stories by this writer.
SirHal
Eric
Anticipation is a powerful theme for a story, perhaps more powerful even than realisation. The author of 'The Other Side of the Door' probably wouldn't compare themself with George Orwell, but this reviewer could see parallels between Doctor Rachel Lynn and Winston Smith of Orwell's novel '1984'. Smith dreaded 'Rooom 101', and Lynn will be at the mercy of a veangeful nurse in the 'Reception Area'. 'The Other Side of the Door' is a nicely-crafted story of trepidation and sexual tension.