Conversation by Rhosymedre, rhosymedre at usa dot com "Ford, what's --? This photo mesmerized you online last night, and now you've taped copies all over the house! What's got into --? ...Ford?" "Hmm? Babe, you know I can't hear you with the water running. Morning, by the way." "Cut that out; you're still wet!... About *these*!" "Yeah? What -- you don't like my choice for new wallpaper?" "Whuhh! Hon, be serious. Please. What fascinates you about a woman on her toes?" "Sure it's a woman? Nothing above mid-calf..." "Based on the curves...let's assume. You feeding a clunky-heels fetish, Hon?" "Nope. Try again." "Okay. You decided to trade me in for a height-challenged model and this is your quirky 'Dear Jane' message?" "Ha. No. I'm still wild about the 5' 9" Amazonian I wed and bed. Dove, quit fixating on the shoes. Shift focus, girl." "Mmm...I know. You and your writer's mentality wove a whole story about why she's poised at the glass door. You're going to submit it to Harper's. Hmmph. Maybe Reader's Digest." "You're lukewarm --" "You're getting off on her waiting for someone or seeing someone off.... But her angle's weird. The wood casing blocks her view, I think. Did you just ignore that and pretend her view of fuzzy gray buildings or a sound wall is unobscured..." "I invoke the Fifth. You're getting hotter, but explore why she's muscle-added to her artificial two inches." "She saw the Publisher's Clearing House Sweepstakes van drive up and she's stretching to track Ed McMahon puff to the door and award her a million smackers?" "Clever, babe. Send *that* to Reader's Digest. But it happens I did a little digging and this pic is one of a series..." "Hey. You withheld evidence when you asked me to analyze? No fair." "I'm disclosing now. She had visitors. She stood alone with a casually-shod man for a while. Perhaps she missed him the moment he started for his car or the subway or wherever and aimed to keep him in sight as long as possible." "So, honeystick, your hopelessly romantic soul bonded to this austere photo because you picture this anonymous woman toed up precariously high to catch a last glimpse of her beloved? "Not quite..." "Well *what* then? I give up." "I imagine her lover whispering to her as he departs, 'Up for me. On the balls of your feet. That's it. After I latch the door behind me, place your hands high and flush on the wood stile and freeze until you hear me leave a message on your machine. Then only may you relax. Phone me back immediately. If you come off your toes too soon, little one, I'll return and tumble your shapely ass over my knee again. I'll pave cranberry red over that flamingo pink!' He kneads her stinging, bare nates under the black shift -- the sole garment besides her high-heels and thigh-highs he allows her on these occasions -- and is gone." "Ford?" "Yes, my kinkstress Dove?" "Let's go buy *me* some killer heels." _____________________________________ SSC 04 Entry for picture category, the photo labeled "Conversation". 500 words.
Joni email
Rho,
This is a delightful conversation between partners. I totally enjoyed the light-hearted feel to the teasing back and forth, and then the very "hot" whispered words. Very well done!
Joni
Haley Brimley email
Delightful. Portrays quite well the process of imagining, extrapolating a possible tale out of a totally unsuggestive picture, and that's the whole point after all. The final line is a winner, yes, but the whole conversation is very entertaining and leaves you wondering -- so much that the actual answer is quite unexpected even though we *know* it's supposed to have something to do with spanking. Congratulations to the author on a well-written story.
Trisha Allen email
Interesting piece! Enjoyed it a lot! It's obvious that this author has a great imagination and keen knowledge for writing. Keep up the great work!