SSC2004 Story: 'BRIEF ENCOUNTER' by Alex Birch Category: Picture Words: 500 'Look at the subtle shading, girls. Brandt's use of monochrome...' Miss Carlsson's voice droned on but Ashley detached herself from her school party, her attention hooked by the crouching naked woman in the half light, her plump buttocks thrust out submissively. Ashley, her face warm, her tummy tingling pleasantly, stared at the picture imagining that the woman's anus was visible between the parted cheeks. 'Beautiful isn't it?' the voice was warm ,deep, refined and Ashley gasped in surprise. 'I...er..dunno.' she stuttered and the man laughed. 'Her bottom. Beautiful..' he repeated '..you must have an opinion, you've been staring at it hard enough!' Ashley's face burned. 'I..er.no.just...' and he laughed again. 'American!' he said and she grinned. 'Yeah, Texas..' she muttered '..that obvious , huh?' 'You have a beautiful accent...' he said warmly '...in fact, if I may say so, you are a beautiful girl!' Ashley was disarmed by his charm. She turned and saw a handsome man in his 50s, hair greying slightly and smiled her appreciation. 'So ..to her bottom. It says so much , don't you think? Thrust out, submissive, the rest of her lost in shadow. What do you think she wants?' he asked. 'Look..' Ashley said desperately, '...I.uh..don't think I should talk like this. I ..' The man stepped away from her and shrugged. 'Sorry I forget myself sometimes in my enthusiasm. You're just a kid ..please forgive me! I shouldn't ask such things!' Ashley's achilles heel was exposed. 'I'm not a kid..'she said defensively '...I'm in 12th grade, 18 next week' 'Happy Birthday..' he smiled '..so, not-a-kid, tell me what she wants?' 'I guess ..to...er..submit' she replied, blushing fiercely. He stood closer. 'A spanking..' he whispered '...she wants a spanking. Her bottom whipped and reddened!' Ashley was dumbstruck. She floundered for words in vain but a strange moist surge inside her panties made her gasp. 'Has my little Texas beauty ever been paddled at school?' he asked and she knew this conversation was wrong but she was spellbound. 'Er..yeah..a coupla times' she stuttered and he smiled. '...and it stung and made you feel horny...' he whispered '...but it's wasted on that lovely bottom of yours ..unless it's bare!' She gaped at him open mouthed as he handed her a business card. 'I took that picture up there...' he said '..and I'd like to take yours. Naked after a whipping, submissive and sore, your arse cheeks open, showing everything. This evening at 7.30 if you want to..and you do!' then he turned on his heel with a smile and walked away. Ashley was trembling, her face scarlet, her panties soaking. Jesus, the school was supposed to be going to some Shakespeare play tonight! Somehow she felt she had a cold coming on and wouldn't make it!
Sarah Nada email
Well written, with a touch of suspense and a creepy/exploitative edge (IMO). A strong entry in the Picture category.
Sarah
Haron email
Ah, so this is where one should go to find young ladies to spank... art galleries! I'm sure many people who are looking will be grateful to find this out. This is a nice story - I like how it steps away from the picture into the room that surrounds it. Good idea, well executed.
Ivy Tran email
Nice job. But I think the scenario wouldn't really happen. It's a nice thought, though. I didn't like the confrontation of the teacher though, it was way too abrupt of a way to ask someone. It was a strange story, a nice thought though, and a nice try.