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Category: School

Making a Splash

Alex Birch

SSC2004:  Story:  'MAKING A SPLASH'

by Alex Birch

Category: School

Words: 500

The swimming gala had finished, house prizes presented and Mrs
Winterton made to leave the area delighted by the evenings success,
with no tomfoolery around the pool to mar the event.

As she was leaving , she noticed two girls who caused her eyes to
narrow and her step to slow.  She secreted herself behind the end
locker as Angela Thomas and Karen Jones, the school's biggest
troublemakers, engaged a first form girl in apparently innocent
conversation by the pool.  Karen, almost imperceptibly, moved behind
the youngster and sank onto all fours while Angela engaged the innocent
in animated conversation.  Suddenly she leaned forward and pushed, the
kid toppling backwards over the kneeling Karen and falling fully
clothed into the pool.  As the kid howled, choking in swallowed
chlorine, Angela and Karen had hysterics then, as departing parents
spotted the flailing body , both rushed to 'help', making sure they
fished her out and affected concern.

The kid sat on the side weeping and soaked to the skin before being
taken away by staff as Mrs Winterton strode down the poolside.

'Thomas, Jones...' she bellowed '...I saw what you did!!  My office
first thing after prayers tomorrow!!' and departed.

The two girls paled.

'Oh shit..' cried Karen '..hadn't spotted the old cow there.  What will
she do?'

'Can't do much ..' said Angela airily '...they've scrapped corporal
punishment so she can only give us detentions or expel us...and she
won't do that!!'

Next day two naughty girls presented themselves nervously at the Head
Teacher's office and Mrs Winterton looked them up and down with
disgust.

'I'm sick of your stupidity...' she barked '...and you are going to pay
for it!'

She rose from her chair

'Right both of you.  Take off your skirts and then bend right across my
desk , bottoms pushed out as far as you can!'

The girls stood in shocked silence their faces white until Angela
whimpered 'Please Miss, you cant..it's...'

Mrs Wintertons face reddened.  'Don't tell me what I can and cant do
girl!! Now DO IT!'

Terrified both girls removed their skirts and lay across the desk ,
bottoms outthrust, trembling as they heard the Head leave the room. Too
frightened to speak, hearts pounding , they stayed in place for what
seemed like hours until they heard the heavy tread behind them.

'Are you ready?' both girls heard, replying with a whimper, closing
their eyes and waiting ...then both shrieked aloud as the seat of their
knickers was hosed down with freezing cold water which ran down their
legs and into their socks. The girls writhed and shivered as the cold
water seemed to run everywhere inside their panties.

'Uncomfortable, isn't it...' Mrs Winterton snarled '...now you can
return to class, minus skirts, and stand, hands on heads,  in front of
your friends soaking like that for another hour until break...and maybe
you wont try that again !!'

Haley

Hehe, nice twist to what could've been an ordinary story. Quick, to-the-point, "dry" style... no puns intended, lol. Pungent, and it made me laugh out loud.

Janet Miles

An excellent story! The author does a fine job of portraying schoolgirl bullies, leads up to the expected spanking, and then pulls the rug out from under the reader while punishing the girls in an appropriate manner. The only thing detracting from perfection, in my opinion, are the errors of spelling and punctuation (primarily the absence of apostrophes in contractions).

JanetM

Ivy

A pretty average work, I guess. Good writing style although I think it could use a little more elaboration, given more time and no word limits. I think if you instilled more fear, I think that's the word, yes put more fear in the girls, the whole scenario would be more realistic.