Category: School
A Disciplinary School
SSC2004: "A Disciplinary School", by Pent Melissa's school had asked us to "find somewhere she would be happier". The magazine advertisement read: "Does your daughter need discipline? Saint Radegund's School will provide it." The brochure talked of "Freedom for students to be themselves!", and Melissa, sixteen, was sold: We sent the fee. Come September, Melissa "didn't want to be seen with her awful parents", so a private hire took her. No letter or call came in the weeks that followed, so we drove there one Saturday, unannounced. The Principal told us: "Melissa is being punished for breaking the rules again. "We would be glad for you to witness your daughter's chastisement". Stunned, we were taken to a basement room with a large wall-mirror. As the door closed, the light went out and we saw a brightly-illuminated room beyond the mirror. Two sturdy nuns brought in Melissa, her obstinate jaw thrust out. They tied Melissa, naked, her back to an upright frame, legs apart. An older nun said: "Melissa, your paddling last week had little effect: We will start today with a cat-o-nine-tails. "I want to hear you apologise for breaking the rules, Melissa", and she layed the cat across Melissa's budding breasts. She yelled and twisted and wrenched at her bindings with each agonising stroke. We turned away, but there was no shutting out Melissa's piercing screams. The note changed and we turned to see the knots of the cat now marking her white stomach. Then changed again: the cat was flicking up between her legs. Melissa yelled in agony at each stroke; but gave no sign of repentance. The nun stopped and Melissa's sobs slowly quietened: "Melissa, we have jumper cables with clamps that give high-voltage shocks; Molten wax to drip onto your skin . . . "But I am choosing something else for you next punishment". Melissa watched, as she greased a wooden screw-driver handle that ended in a large ball, then slid the metal blade into a bamboo. Melissa was re-tied to face the wood frame, a wood block under each heel so she stood on tip-toes. The bamboo was stood on the floor, and bent so the handle pressed up into the cleft of Melissa's high-water bottom. "Now, Melissa, I will remove the blocks under your heels. "When you can no longer hold yourself up on tip-toes, your heels will drop and the wooden screw-driver handle will be forced up into you. "If I took an hour to ease it in, you would have a delirious orgasm from the excitement. "But this will be sudden. "You can not imagine the pain, and your hole will be bruised black and blue. "It will be agony for you to shit for days afterwards". "The wood blocks are out!" and she cut Melissa's bottom with a cane. "Stop! "It's huge!! "It will kill me!!! "I *will* obey the schools rules, I promise!!" Then words that Melissa had never before used in her life: "I apologise, truly I do!"
Angie email
Wow. Squick city with this one! I had a hard time reading it because it was so very harsh, but I realize that falls under a YKINMK umbrella and doesn't say much for the merits of th story alone. So, just looking at the story ... I felt like the dialogue was a little forced, not very natural at all. But I really like the twist at the end, with Melissa finally apologizing. I'd like to know how many times she had been punished -- because it seemed rather odd that she would have been at this school for weeks without finally saying those words before, but how much can you show with 500 words, right? It was a good start to a very harsh story.
Eric
People who 'day-dreamed' at school will certainly find a lot to savour in 'A Disciplinary School'. Released from the constraints of the word-limit, this snack would become a most enjoyable meal.
Polara email
I like the use of four successive partial quotes at the beginning of this intense little scenario. They tell a great deal of the backstory in just a few words. There is a nice symmetry in that Melissa is shown to be a difficult pupil and daughter at the beginning, and her repentance at the end. The punishment scene is very intense, and creates images that will stay with me for quite a while, I think. I don't care for the older nun's dialog, she doesn't seem to have any nun-like characteristics at all, either positive or negative.