Category: Schoolshortlisted
Convincing Enough
CONVINCING ENOUGH (SCHOOL) (M/F) "All I'm saying is that this costume isn't very realistic", Stephanie said. "This skirt is way to short to be part of a school uniform". "It barely covers my panties!" "I rather like it" her husband replied as he ogled her legs. "Keep your eyes on the road, or we won't get wherever it is you're taking me" she replied. "You'd better get used to the short skirt, dear" her husband teased. "You'll be wearing it for the rest of week". "You'll have to be careful walking or sitting or your underpants will be on display for everyone to see". "Dream on" she shot back. "I only have to stay in uniform if you can convince people that I'm a student". "My work clothes are in the trunk and..." "And there they'll stay" her husband replied smugly. "Those clothes are great for a corporate lawyer, but I don't want you to get those big girl clothes dirty, honey". Stephanie frowned and pulled down the car's vanity mirror. The pigtailed student with the school cap and geeky plastic glasses was a far cry from the stylish corporate attorney who had been sitting in the car just a few minutes before. At 29 Stephanie was short, and thin, and rather flat chested. But she was also a graduate of Harvard Law and a fierce corporate attorney. Stephanie was confident that her intellect, poise, and maturity would shine through. It didn't matter where she was going or what she was wearing. After all she was an attorney! No one would believe this silly ruse. Soon Stephanie would be back into her designer business suit and her silly husband would forget about his ridiculous "schoolgirl spanking" fantasies once and for all. Stephanie caught herself biting her nails as she recalled the way the man at the gas station had looked at her when she had come out of the restroom in her school uniform. Why was she biting her nails? She hadn't done that in years! "How much longer?" Stephanie whined. "I need to use the restroom". "No time for potty breaks, sweetie" her husband said in his most patronizing voice. "Maybe next time you'll use the potty when Daddy tells you". Stephanie clenched her teeth and squeezed her thighs together. She hated being treated this way, but a deal was a deal! At last they approached a huge complex of Gothic stone building surrounded by razor wire. Stephanie bit her lip nervously and tugged down on her skirt as her husband pulled up to the guardhouse. The guard looked into the car and smiled. "Nice to see you again, Sir" he said. "And I see you brought your daughter this time". The guard looked at Stephanie and smiled. "In uniform already? "That's a good girl". "The Headmaster's waiting". As they drove past the guardhouse Stephanie saw the sign on the gate: BRECKWOOD REFORMATORY FOR GIRLS Stephanie's blood turned to ice as she realized her business clothes were indeed staying in the trunk.
Haley Brimley email
Hehe... so much for the schoolgirl fantasies. Written quite nicely, the story is supposed to be a waiting game before the final "shock", so to speak; it is a little *too* waiting in the reviewer's opinion, and it gives the feeling that some of this text might have been used in otherwise. This could, and maybe should, have been a shorter story. Nonetheless, the overall scenario is entertaining and very in-tune with tradition, and the characterisation is intriguing. A pleasant read.
Trisha Allen email
Great story! Quite enjoyable. Thanks so much for writing it. The writer has told the story well, describing every thing the woman was feeling. Well written! Keep up the good work!
Ivy Tran email
I thought this was a great one! There goes joking around! I loved the part where she finds in the end that she actually didn't win the deal, she lost! A great schoolgirl story, with a nice little twist in it.