SSC2007-02: Justice Without Delay (M/F, spanking) [Adult] [495 Words]

This story is fiction and deals with domestic discipline (spanking). If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now.

All story characters are adults (18+)

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The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote@mail.com

Justice Without Delay
By
Y Lee Coyote

Tom and Jodi had just gotten home from school and were examining Mom's car in the driveway when their dad drove up and joined them. "Not good, Thomas, not good at all." Tom had had his licence only a few months. "What happened?"

"Looks like the brakes failed." said Jodi. The driveway had a sharp curve immediately after the turn-in from the street. The car had tried to go through a tree and had a crushed fender.

"Not likely because of the skid marks; looks like speeding. We did talk about this, Tom?"

"Yes, Sir."

"And about driving on school days?"

"Oh, Yes, Sir."

Dad put out his hand and snarled: "The keys." Tom leaned into the car, retrieved them and handed them to his father.

"Get the strap."

"Yes, Sir." They all went into the house. Both kids were remembering what Dad had promised -- a strapping for speeding into the garage.

When the entire family was together, just three minutes later, Dad spoke again. "Thomas, I'm very disappointed. I promised a strapping for speeding in the driveway. Is there any reason why I shouldn't make good?"

"No, Sir." Tom handed his father the strap and sat down.

His dad looked at him with that look that said: you are tying my patience, boy, especially since you are already in big trouble. "Get into position, immediately, _young man_."

"I was not the driver, Father." Tom said softy. Their mother gasped and held her head in her hands.

"WHAT?" Tom repeated what he had just said. "Why didn't you say so before?"

"You did not ask, Sir. Since I'm not allowed to drive on a school day without special permission, I did not think you would have thought I had been driving."

Dad was perplexed. This was not the way things should be. He was too rigid to change course. There had been a crime and the perpetrator must be punished. "Get up here, Sylvia." he snapped.

The teens watched their mother slowly obey their most angry father. "Bend over the chair."

When she had done so, he lifted her skirt exposing her modest panties and tucked it into her collar. Then he grabbed the panties and yanked them down, exposing her buttocks. Tom and Jodi looked at each other most amazed. The kids watched silently as Dad got into position and swung the strap at their mother's bare behind. They cringed at the report. They watched their mother's bottom turn bright red and listened to her cries. They each empathized easily with their mother's pain. The strapping over, Father went to his den.

Tom quickly lowered his Mom's dress. Then two teens helped their mother to her feet and to her bedroom to rest. Tom told Jodi to try to comfort her. He returned a couple of minutes later with some anti-pain cream. "Put some of this on her, er, bottom, Sis." while I get some ice.

It was very quiet at dinner that evening.

The End

© Copyright A.I.L. July 20, 2007

This was a slightly strange story in sociological terms (boy that sounds pretentious!) in that the action seems to take place in modern America but the mode of address by Tom to his father...the use of 'Father' and 'Sir' seems to smack of a byegone age. This jarred on me a bit  but maybe there are areas in the States where such formality is common.

I guess the intent was to demonstrate the strictness of the autocratic and paternalistic family environment , thus setting the scene for the way errant Mom was subsequently treated in front of the kids.

The story theme was pretty commonplace and the 'surprise' element wasn't surprising enough to elevate this one above the ordinary, I'm afraid.

This story had a surprise ending, which is always good.  The style was very old-fashioned in a "news-report" sort of way which was different and gave it a more immediate quality.  While the language was a bit stilted, it got the point across.

I wasn't sure how I felt about this story.  The style was very formal, so maybe that was what made it difficult to see anything hot in the fantasy.   It was well written, it just didn't seem to hit any of my hot buttons for some reason.   The twist ending was good though, because until then I thought it would be a traditional father/son spanking story.

The author does a nice job of setting the scene and describing the characters.  The dialogue seems a little too stilted and formal to be believed as spoken by teens.  I really enjoyed the unexpected twist of the mother being the one responsable for the car trouble.  The actual spanking and procedure are well described and appealing.

This was a cute little domestic discipline story with a nice switch at the end. We think we're going to see a teenage boy spanked and instead it's the mother who gets it. It's not an unusual setup or plot really, but it's still a good one, and not overused. I didn't feel any sympathy for the mother who seemed quite content to let her son take the punishment for her misdeeds, and was glad that justice was served in the end. I get the feeling this story is meant to take place years ago, perhaps in the 50's or so, which explains the very formal dialogue, and in that time period it is more acceptable that the father straps the mother in front of her children.

I do think there were a few flaws in the plot. It's very hard to get up enough speed in a driveway to leave skidmarks, and still have any chance of stopping, but in the story it's made clear that it has happened enough times that the father actually needed to make a rule about it. Some of the typos and mistakes made certain passages difficult to understand without rereading, but in some places they were actually kind of amusing.