adult
Em Bare Assed
by
Tyr

Adult Em Bare Assed by Tyr M/F M/F implied


He looks at the business card. The photo shows Emily turning her face back to be seen with her very red bruised bottom. The writing says "Spank Emily's bare bottom to match photo." On the back handwritten is "talked back."

The twelve year old girl blushes. She holds up a large thick hairbrush.

"Do your parents always ask strangers to spank you?"

"Only when I do something in public. Mom says if she's embarassed, I should be embarrassed. You need to sign the card after. Mom might call you to check."

"Have you ever ..."

"My girlfriend paddled me so hard I thought she'd be satisfied. I had to fulfill five new cards as well as the old one again. A busy two weeks. Please don't go easy on me, because then Mom will give out another card to do it again."

"Does your Mother always pick out strangers to discipline you?"

Handing him the hairbrush, "About twice a week on average."

"She's sounds very strict."

She nods, unbuttons her jeans, sliding down panties to her ankles. He sits down. She goes over his knee. At first he hesitates, but her beautiful round white bottom beckons. He swats her lightly six times. The bottom is slightly rosie.

"Harder. Much harder," She cries.

He smiles, realizing how much he wants to do exactly that. He puts some muscle into his swing getting a satisfying yelp from the girl. Alternating cheeks he swings harder and harder. The girl is sobbing "no, no," but he continues. Her bottom pumping from the unreleased heat, her wetness peeking out between her thighs. He continues spanking as her legs kick out.

Thinking back on the card, he works to out do it. Taking his time, taking a longer swing, high overhead. Smacking becomes cracking and her sobbing becomes screaming. Yet he doesn't stop. For another ten minutes he beats on. When he stops he grasps her bottom rubbing as he knows she needs him to. Then he stops, a tease. He swats away her hand, continuing in his own good time. His fingers teasing her wet lower lips. He flicks his fingernails over her clit to finish her off.

He lets her rise. She stands wiping her eyes, pants still at her ankles. Placing the card photo next to her ass.

"I think I did pretty good. Hope you don't hold it against me."

Hugging him, his face against her stomach. She rubs his head and he continues rubbing her bottom. Finally she pulls up her jeans. He signs her card with a smile adding his phone number underneath.

"If she likes my work, maybe she'll call me the next time you're bad."

She answers, "If she doesn't, I might."

Scooting off with a giggle. He watches her uncomfortable walk with satisfaction.


A week later the phone rings.

"Hello."

"You don't know me, but you .... met my daughter."

"Has she been bad again."

"No, but I have. Can I come over?"

"You bet, but I'll have to be harder on you than your daughter."

"You're strict, I like that."


Note: While the story could be interpreted as a child, I wrote it as a sequel to Catholic Girl which I entered in 2005. What would happen if the Mother found out and joined in?

If it makes the story hotter for you, you can also see if as M/f M/F. Did I mention I like Child/Teenage spanking stories : )

skull reviews

An interesting concept and well-executed.  The suspended " Have you ever ..." was very nice and I was very willing to suspend disbelief at the improbability to follow along and read to the end.  My biggest confusion came from the M/F label because I kept expecting a twist at the end to turn her from a 12-year-old into an adult.  I wish it had been categorized a bit differently, but I enjoyed it very much.

~ Iris

A VERY squirmy premise.  Business cards with the color of her bottom to be matched?  I might have to make some of those on my printer for myself.  You've definitely sparked some fantasy material here!  I did get a little uncomfortable with the sexual part until I remembered how sexual I was at that age, when it came to spanking anyway.  Didn't act on it, except with myself!

~ Jen

I have to admit I loved the bit about making Emily's bottom as red as it is in the photo on the business card.  Nothing like a good challenge like that to get the blood flowing.  It was nice because I could potentially see this played out by any number of adults in a role play scenario, as you suggested.   The story is very well written.  I don't know if it breaks any rules on the "technicality" that one of the players is acting the part of a twelve-year-old child or not, but I thought it was great.

~ Jujubees

Severe child spanking stories aren't really my thing, but I have to admit I loved this story. While I don't think this story is realistic for any day and age, and especially not now, it's just a great read. Especially the end. I would love to see the mother get more than the girl got... really is cruel to do that to a child. I was half wondering, though, as the girl ran off giggling, if she hadn't made up the card herself to get spanked.

The dialogue was well written, the spanking was detailed, and it had a great ending.. what more can you ask for? My only issue with this story was the category in which it was entered. A 12 year old being sent for a spanking by her mother doesn't really fit the ADULT category, and even though the mother was clearly going to get spanking too...the story was still mainly about the daughter. (I did see the author's note but do not remember the story that preceded this one... so maybe I am missing something?)

~ Kessily